I propose cybermarriage in which we write long passionate somethings together. Or at least a tryst. You don't tell your girlfriend...I don't tell my boyfriend...you get the drift.
I will NEVER abandon you! Just remember you owe me a bonus scene ;)
I loved ths story, you know it: the snark, the irony, the unabashed romance, the use of Mel's and Justin's POV, the structure that moved between pat and present, etc. But what really makes it special for me, is the fact that you never let it become an act of revenge against any of the characters that were most mistreated by CL. You gave us hope that the queer family B/J belong to can be at peace, or at least work on it. Yes, queers care for each other and no, lesbians and gay men are not constantly at war, even if they disagree and fuck up royally. Mistakes can be fixed and you fixed quite a few of them brilliantly.
You gave us hope that the queer family B/J belong to can be at peace, or at least work on it. Yes, queers care for each other and no, lesbians and gay men are not constantly at war, even if they disagree and fuck up royally.
And you mention the structure, which is as much yours as mine. You are my beta goddess. Thank YOU.
But what really makes it special for me, is the fact that you never let it become an act of revenge against any of the characters that were most mistreated by CL. You gave us hope that the queer family B/J belong to can be at peace, or at least work on it.
Brilliantly put. And as much as I like to snark about Mel and Linds, I'm so glad you didn't demonise them, and you made me care for them again.
And you missy, beta-job very, very well done. *smooches*
Well, this time I actually got to the very end before I started crying, which is a first. There is just something about the way you write. I'm the one who is fucked. =)
Here's the deal, m'dear. It is 4:27am and between being blown away by what I've just read, and being completely exhausted, I really don't think I can formulate my thoughts well enough to leave you the feedback you deserve. Not to mention there is just SO much I need to absorb and comment on... it is going to take a re-read upon my waking tomorrow, uhh, today technically, for me to be able to articulate anything with an ounce of grace.
SOOOOOOOOOOO, with all of that said.... my 'real' feedback very soon. This was just...GUH...I have no words (yet) but...HOLY CRAP that was INCREDIBLE.
Awwwww. Thank you for saying something before you went to bed. I tell myself, "Oh, I"m going to post this and go to bed," and then I check for feedback fifteen times. I'm so sick.
Holy shit!!! What a great ending to a great story! Sexy, emotional, and completely satisfing. You did an awesome job. :D
You broke me with this line: I can’t even explain what it is about fucking him that makes me feel like I’m seventeen again, and totally in over my head.
Can't wait to experience the places you will take us to in the sequal.
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Uh, I seriously can't even leave feedback right now. There was so much here. And I so need that sequel too now. Um.
I'm gonna read it again and see if I can put into words how amazing this was.
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Sheesh, I just posted this, don't I get a break at all?
Seriously, I secretly love being begged for more.
I guess that's not really a secret.
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seriously.
When blondes collide. *snork*
I propose cybermarriage in which we write long passionate somethings together. Or at least a tryst. You don't tell your girlfriend...I don't tell my boyfriend...you get the drift.
think about it.
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And my girlfriend won't care, she thinks my thing for imaginary gay boys is hot.
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*kisses your brain*
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I loved ths story, you know it: the snark, the irony, the unabashed romance, the use of Mel's and Justin's POV, the structure that moved between pat and present, etc. But what really makes it special for me, is the fact that you never let it become an act of revenge against any of the characters that were most mistreated by CL. You gave us hope that the queer family B/J belong to can be at peace, or at least work on it. Yes, queers care for each other and no, lesbians and gay men are not constantly at war, even if they disagree and fuck up royally. Mistakes can be fixed and you fixed quite a few of them brilliantly.
Thank you.
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You gave us hope that the queer family B/J belong to can be at peace, or at least work on it. Yes, queers care for each other and no, lesbians and gay men are not constantly at war, even if they disagree and fuck up royally.
And you mention the structure, which is as much yours as mine. You are my beta goddess. Thank YOU.
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Brilliantly put. And as much as I like to snark about Mel and Linds, I'm so glad you didn't demonise them, and you made me care for them again.
And you missy, beta-job very, very well done. *smooches*
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Here's the deal, m'dear. It is 4:27am and between being blown away by what I've just read, and being completely exhausted, I really don't think I can formulate my thoughts well enough to leave you the feedback you deserve. Not to mention there is just SO much I need to absorb and comment on... it is going to take a re-read upon my waking tomorrow, uhh, today technically, for me to be able to articulate anything with an ounce of grace.
SOOOOOOOOOOO, with all of that said.... my 'real' feedback very soon. This was just...GUH...I have no words (yet) but...HOLY CRAP that was INCREDIBLE.
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You broke me with this line:
I can’t even explain what it is about fucking him that makes me feel like I’m seventeen again, and totally in over my head.
Can't wait to experience the places you will take us to in the sequal.
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