Desires, Part 3

[xie_xie_xie]

This is the third chapter of Desires, which is the third in the series that began with Plans and Decisions. Chapter One is here. Chapter Two is here.

Intercontinental beta-ing above and beyond the call of duty - and probably well beyond the definition of "beta-ing" for that matter - by the peripatetic

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[vlredreign]

Can I give feedback to your lj cut?

LMAO

Mmmm. The sex was sublime. I was squeeing last night, don't you know. These lines had me cracking up:

Finally he shifted back up to lie next to me. “This is our night for fucking on the floor. You’d never know we have eight bedrooms.”

“How did they bring them back?”

“Remember the Governor, from the planet where JT and Rage went to get married?”

“Sure, Rage had him put on a penal world.”

“It was a minimum security penal world, for white collar intergalactic criminals.”

“Naturally.”

“He busted out, along with some mad scientist imprisoned there, who knew how to re-animate the dead.”

Emmett nodded sympathetically. “I hate when that happens.”

I had to agree.

And this one was a giggle, a squee, and an "Awww" all at the same time:

“I know there’s nothing I can do, but is there anything I can do? Bribe someone, have anyone killed or kidnapped, remodel something

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks, hon! I've kind of always thought anyone who saw Brian as cold-hearted, must have been watching a different show!

[germansoulmate]

I always thought that, too. I always have thought: "They must be blind and deaf."

Exactly my thoughts.

this is gonna be long....

[happier_bunny]

I found him in the workout room, but he was listening to his iPod and didn’t hear me come in. Brian kept it dim and quiet, not bright and noisy like the gym. He was sitting on the weight bench doing bicep curls, his shirt soaked with sweat and his arm muscles straining. Which woke me up better than all the caffeine in all the coffee in all the Starbucks in Pennsylvania.

Yummy, now I see what you meant. ;)

He leaned a little closer to me, but not touching. “I thought that since you slept all day…you might want to come out dancing with me tonight.”

I flattened my palm against his upper arm and curved my fingers around his muscle. I could feel him breathing on my face. I licked my lips. “Okay.”

awwwww, that's like the sweetest, most erotic thing ever.

He still wasn’t touching me, but his breathing was shallow. He was sitting on the weight bench, his legs spread, the dumbbell still in his hand, his arm lying across his thigh. I ran my hands over his shoulders and down his back, slipping them up inside his tank top, pushing the iPod

[suzvoy]

*sigh* If Brian could finally start to deal with the bashing, that could be such a good thing...lovely lovely lovely.

That said, I kinda wanna smack Daph for asking him ;)

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks, Suz! And yeah, I know...

[starspider]

Amazing chapter to an amazing story.
The way you write the love between these two.... can I use the word amazing again?
*sigh* Great job.

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks for the amazing feedback. ;)

[specialj67]

Aaaahhhh! New chapter! And you used "peripatetic" in a sentence! Okay, now I'll actually go and read...

[xie_xie_xie]

LOL - I like big words.

[herberta2006]

I love this chapter! It always makes so emotional when Brian cries, and it's even worse when it's written as well as this is.

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks... Brian doesn't cry in canon as often as Justin did, but he DOES cry, so it's interesting how hard it is to have him cry in character.