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Chapter Fifteen, "Bitchiness"

Aug 01, 2009 12:11

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Chapter 15, "Bitchiness"

CHRISTOPHERSo there I was, willingly trapped in that house again. By now, Frig was practically interchangeable with a regular Zmeephish-Quian, and it made me feel numb inside. Like I was immune. Immune to aliens. Whatever happened after the stupid baby, I ( Read more... )

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nightfalltwen August 1 2009, 17:17:33 UTC

Lessons to come!

Dun dun dunnnnnnnnn.

Klaxie rolled his eyes and shoved me a little, which made me want to snap off his tentacle and shove it up his backside.

Would she even be able to find it? Like the right place to shove?

I wonder.

insipidcalamity August 2 2009, 16:24:04 UTC

This question will keep me up at night D=

madmadmaddymad August 1 2009, 17:34:04 UTC

She shook her long, sunshine and happiness colored hair...

lol

I can't stop myself from being excited when Christopher narrates.

Even though she's sad. She has so many reasons to be sad. And reading the suddenly sad parts of her narration makes ME sad...

I still love reading her chapters.
Bitchiness
To me this chapter title is for Jessica
She's kind of a bitch. But so was Frig, once.
It seems Christopher has a thing for 'bitchiness'

Also Frig can't stop pointing at herself. We know there's a dang baby in you, Frig! Get over it! Geez.

karmyn75 August 1 2009, 18:41:44 UTC

I just hope Christopher gets a happy ending. She deserves it for putting up with Frig for so long and for being an alien hunting badass.

OMG CHRISTOPHERXJESSICA! baddest_wolf August 1 2009, 20:29:03 UTC

"She shook her long, sunshine and happiness colored hair and I caught a whiff of strawberry Suave shampoo. I blinked, trying to breathe. I think I may have even slapped myself a little." Wow. Just wow.

"the moon of Sploof" made me think of the lost moon of poosh. ^_^ Anyone else the same?

a_respite August 1 2009, 21:29:43 UTC

Christopher/Jessica, huh? I don't know. Remains to be seen if Jessica can go from bitchiness to badassedness.

Oh, and this:

She pointed at her balloon belly, and I wanted to slap her. It was really annoying how she did that all the time. We know there's a dang baby in you, Frig! Get over it! Geez.

needs to be said out loud a lot more often than it is.

insipidcalamity August 2 2009, 16:22:31 UTC

I agree with all of your points, sir. The jury is still out on this Christopher/Jessica thing.