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Chapter Fifteen, "Bitchiness"

Aug 01, 2009 12:11

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Chapter 15, "Bitchiness"

CHRISTOPHERSo there I was, willingly trapped in that house again. By now, Frig was practically interchangeable with a regular Zmeephish-Quian, and it made me feel numb inside. Like I was immune. Immune to aliens. Whatever happened after the stupid baby, I ( Read more... )

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lizren697 August 1 2009, 23:20:58 UTC

poor poor christopher.

i think it would be kinda funny if this pregnancy ended with just a normal human baby.

insipidcalamity August 2 2009, 16:20:40 UTC

Omg I second this!

tallybonker August 2 2009, 16:48:23 UTC

And I third that!

canine_kitten August 3 2009, 15:07:52 UTC

I'll fourth it ;D

nzanon August 1 2009, 23:53:06 UTC

The more I see through Christopher's POV, the more I begin to detest Frig, and the more I keep liking Christopher. This feels exactly how I began to hate Bella in Breaking Dawn/want Jacob and Leah to hook up and bond over angst.

Maybe Chris should take out her slimesplodin' anger on Shmeertz and Mr. Leader and say they tripped and fell on her laser blaster while she was cleaning it~

tskytkxy August 2 2009, 03:03:09 UTC

Tabitha will be taught. Christopher has an unwilling crush on Jessica. I'm can't wait to see what will happen when Christopher sees the liquid alien baby.

This is the last book! I want to see what happens, but I want the book to never end! MMRG. MMMMRG. DOES NOT COMPUTE. *boom*

claire_chan August 2 2009, 03:23:50 UTC

"Being alone these days created a special sort of challenge. People were everywhere." I agree so loudly with this sentiment, wishing for more solitude.

Loud guffaw at "who reads?". Indeed, besides those scholarly sorts of people, who does? Happiness colored also made me giggle. :D

"Everyone is our friends"... don't make me get overly grammatical this late. I give up defining exactly how this feels wrong, but it does.

xlormp August 2 2009, 08:47:44 UTC

I have put quotation marks around "our friends" so it now reads, "Everyone is 'our friends'." Does that help your brain? :)

claire_chan August 2 2009, 12:39:03 UTC

I was looking for the sentence in question to see how it did with my brain, and only found Awesome Writing by the Most Stupendous Contemporary Author in Existence Right Now, so I'm going to say it probably did! :D

Thank you! ^_^

elsolylaluna August 2 2009, 03:54:08 UTC

Christopher, please. Everyone knows coconut Suave is the sexy Suave scent.