Chapter Eighteen, "Baby"

[xlormp]

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Chapter 18, "Baby"

CHRISTOPHEREveryone reacted immediately, leaping up and rushing around, trying to figure out what to do. Frig screeched and wailed as more goo and slime streamed from every imaginable fold. The floor quickly flooded with the stuff. Frig's screams and everyone's

Comments

[tytaniaherself]

At last, Frig is hot again!

[madmadmaddymad]

Ok

[madmadmaddymad]

"Oh Frig. Someone from the baby warming brigade should have brought you a baby naming book! Tsk Tsk!"

Okay guys, which one of you was suppossed to do that? Fess up!

[khittyhawk]

Well, that was pretty cool. I was surprised to see the multiple viewpoints for this chapter, but I like hearing the reactions from (almost) all the spectators. I love how you parodied the hybrid baby. Hector 2.0's version of imprinting is much less squicky, I'm glad. I'm a bit disappointed both Frig and Lou are back to normal, but I'm still waiting to hear your reasoning.
The only part of Breaking Dawn I read was the birthing scene, and now I wish that part was in a better book, because it was deliciously gross and creepy.
Also: Wemjox.

[cyshobbitlass]

OMG!

Another ASOIAF and Xlormp fan XD

[opaleyes]

AWESOME.

[opaleyes]

Wooooah is that Lou on your icon or is it another, lesser hobo?

[opaleyes]

That is my Lou icon. XD It says Ivy League because I like to think he went to Princeton.

And I basically just like to think that b/c I was wearing a Princeton sweatshirt while imitating Lou in this video:

XD

[opaleyes]

OMG, that is the most beautiful song ever sung by someone who is singing. Thank you. :D

That hobo seems so much more aggressive than Lou! ): Maybe he's just angry that the one-legged pony beat him in a fight because he forgot to put a lemon on his toe.

[auracel]

This is a very schizophrenic chapter. XD

Also, best name ever. XDXDXD