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[xmare_imbrium]

Title: Close
Pairing: HaeTeukHae
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: It's been scientifically proven that if you look at someone you like for eight seconds straight, it means you fell in love with them. So what does it mean when you stare at them for much, much longer, with an expression that clearly says you'd gladly just eat them up?

Comments

[amine87]

of course, I hoped someone would write a HaeTeuk after MB... and thank you for this ^o^/

"Well, it says that it's been scientifically proven that if you look at someone you like for eight seconds straight, it means you fell in love with them.

is it...?
*weird ideas in mind 8D*

and I want the next part now~~ XD

[amine87]

and um, a spelling mistake here, dear?

He expects Donghae to laugh, make a joke or hug him, but he centraily doesn't except him to lean in and kiss him on the lips.

[xmare_imbrium]

Oh, thanks for pointing that out! <3 I always do that to that word lol.

And yes, what the article says is true. xD Well, at least that's what the scientists think it's true. I really don't know. XDDD

Thanks for the comment ^0^

[prototypic]

I LIKED THIS SO MUCH IT DESERVES KEYBOARDSPAZZING AHSDFKASDHSAJK AND THE CAPS.

Lol, okay. Kangteuk is like...my only ever OTP. But this is so...wonderful and I can't wait to find out what happened between KangTeuk and I'm going to put this in my memory list now which is a first I think for any non-kt related fictions and I should end my really long sentence here.

♥

EDIT: you should watch this. srsly. When hae just randomly went in between Kangteuk..I immediately thought of this fiction.

[xmare_imbrium]

XDDDDDD THANK YOU! Oh, I love KangTeuk too, but Hyuk and Hae couples tend to eat my brain. Still, I'm glad you like my story!

LOL I watched. He really did. Bad boy. XDDDDD I know what's on his mind.

[korichan]

This was really well-written, and you can definitely write smut. :3 I'm not one to usually go for this pairing, but I've noticed them like crazy lately and I'm glad that I was able to read this~

[xmare_imbrium]

I'm glad you read it too! ^^ I'm not sure about the smut part but I'll keep on trying haha. Until I'm happy with it myself. XD Thanks a lot for the comment!

[yesunglover]

"Fuck, I want you." he whispers hoarsely.

Leeteuk feels his heartbeat race.

"Then take me." he whispers back.

That line sent delicious tingles up to my ear!

And don't worry about the smut, I think detailed smut has a habit of turning trashy.

I love the pairing. It's very rare ^^

[xmare_imbrium]

Haha I'd like someone to say that to me too. No Asian boys around, unfortunately. But I'll change that.

Yup, the pairing is rare. I actually hope it will change. xDDDD

Btw, I looooove you av like crazy. ^^ Thanks for the comment!

[shaniskara]

WOW!!!!!!!!
THIS ISN'T A BAD IDEA >.<
*squealing* I LOVEEEE THIISSSSSS!!!

update soon please *puppy eyes*
sorry for commenting just now -__-

[xmare_imbrium]

Um, late comments are totally okay! :DDDD Glad you liked it!

And I already updated haha xDDD!

[shaniskara]

nyahahahaha XDDD
been really busy these days -__-
*go looking for the update*