(Untitled)

[xoverau]

Dear Author, and I Use That Term Loosely

Comments

[tricksterquinn]

*SMITES*
(her not you, obvs)

[xoverau]

The only pleasure is in picturing him "trying" a wonderful kisser, rather like a canape. Crunching through her legs, swallowing her headfirst, etc.

[tricksterquinn]

Oh, what an IMAGE! *giggles helplessly*

[slippery_fish]

"Dearest girl, you are by far the most wonderful kisser I have ever tried"?

AHAHAAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

*is dead*

[xoverau]

I wasn't sure whether I was more ooged out by the glorious willful mane or the dearest girl. Both of them made my head bulge. Gaaahhghhhghg.

[normalhumanbein]

Some people shouldn't be allowed into fandom, and some fandoms don't deserve the things people do to them.

[xoverau]

Otherwise it's a really good story--a little youthful, but good, and it does unusual things with the topics. It's only when things get to romance that it turns horribly, ridiculously, stomach-churningly twee (and there's a m/m pairing in it that's just the same).

Unrelatedly, it bugs me that the gay and bi characters in the fic randomly defend themselves about being attracted to underage kids (as if we'd assume they were), or are being accused of it by 'good' characters who are later mollified. Methinks the author has a hangup.

[darkseaglass]

I feel the need to share a quote from Jim McGreevy's (the recent ex-governor of New Jersey) autobiography now:

"I pulled him to the bed and we made love like I'd always dreamed: a boastful, passionate, whispering, masculine kind of love..."

[withdiamonds]

Good lord.

[darkseaglass]

I'm sorry, I just had to share. *g*

(icon aimed at New Jersey, not you)

[withdiamonds]

I was *eating.* You made me choke on my hummus.

[xoverau]

I want that job. "So what do you do?" "Oh, I try kissers. Lemme tell you about this wonderful one."

Reading this fic has kept me on a knife's edge of good and bad points. On one hand, it nails kinks of mine that are rarely, if ever, addressed well in fanfiction. I'd put up with a lot for that. On the other hand, GLORIOUS, WILLFUL MANE.

[withdiamonds]

Yeah, I know what you mean about the kinks. I'll overlook a lot for that, too. It's hard to overlook willful hair, though.

[xoverau]

I've almost put it down for good three times. Finally I've got to the point that the moment I read the girl's name in a paragraph, I make my eyes go vague and scroll downward quickly.