LJ Idol Week Seven- Bupkis

[xreesex]

You claim to have a hollow, deep inside, that I can’t penetrate. You tell me it’s always been there, that you’ve just accepted it. You’re so fucking beautiful when you cry

Comments

[zeitgeistic]

This feels like it has a really creepy undertone to it, but I'm not sure if it's really there or if I'm just being dense. Are you writing from the PoV of a vampire?

PS - very festive icon, lol

[whipchick]

this reminds me of teenage love, and how intense it was…

[noodledays]

I totally agree.

[pixiebelle]

So poetic and intense. Your way with words here is really fantastic.

[ecosopher]

I had to read this twice, but I get it, now :) Good job.

[myrna_bird]

Yeah. Vampire love.