LJ Idol Week 9: Counterintuitive

[xreesex]

There was a silence between them, an unspoken knowledge that nothing would be the same again. She'd been there before; one blonde child living with her mother, another growing inside. He was new to all of this, though, and it scared him

Comments

[shadowwolf13]

Aw :(

[xreesex]

=)

[n3m3sis42]

Oh wow. I wanted to know more, but what you shared was enough to make me cry. So beautiful and sad.

[xreesex]

Thank you so much.

[whipchick]

Loved the shift in perspectives from the two characters. Particularly nice line - "it didn't surprise him as much as it could have." Nice job.

[xreesex]

Thanks! I didn't know if it would read well, but I liked it.

[rattsu]

One of my favorites so far, so short and stark, little jagged shards fitting together.

[xreesex]

That's a huge compliment, thank you!

[myrna_bird]

People can change, sometimes not soon enough.
Very touching entry.