LJ Idol Week 9: Counterintuitive

[xreesex]

There was a silence between them, an unspoken knowledge that nothing would be the same again. She'd been there before; one blonde child living with her mother, another growing inside. He was new to all of this, though, and it scared him

Comments

[snarkerdoodle]

Best last lines I've read this week. Beautiful piece.

[rumplebuttkins]

One of your best entries in this entire thing! And, yeah, I thought the ending was perfect. Great great writing, love.

[nyxocity]

Beautiful. So very beautiful. As always.

[baxaphobia]

Oh how sad!