Lj idol Week 25- Cesspool

[xreesex]

Oh, God, this is it. This is it, I'm drowning. It's all over...

"PAULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYY"

I can't even shout up to him, I can hear him, but there's no way he'd hear me with all of this shit rushing past between us. This is all my fault, I shouldn't have traded shifts, I knew I wasn't ready for the night raid, and yet, I wanted

Comments

[whipchick]

Interesting POV! One small typo - "flies".

A neat take on the topic, for sure :)

[lawchicky]

LOL!

[jem0000000]

Oh, wow! Poor fly. But I think it's probably a goner....

[halfshellvenus]

I foresaw a lot of sewer-related stories, but not this one!

That whirlpool, though... not gonna survive that!

[basric]

It was an amusing twisted tale. I loved it.