[Fanfic] Crimson Red

Oct 19, 2007 21:58

Title: Crimson Red
Author: xruki_x
Pairing; HayaRyu
Rating: !PG-15!
Genre: FLUFF!!~ Maybe a TINY TINY TINY!! bit of angst
Wordcount: about 2000..
Summary: Hayato and Ryu are going on vacation in a summer palace in China.
A/N This fic is dedicated to: paddyaboard. I promised her this one-shot in June and haha.. *sweatdrops* my computer hates me. Word hates ( Read more... )

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zerochou October 19 2007, 20:22:04 UTC
“Exactly, you were just as sweet and innocent as a little kitten!”
♥♥♥ Ryu is just SO MUCH LOVE in this fic~~
Oh, and CONTINUE NOSTALGIA XD

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xruki_x October 19 2007, 20:36:29 UTC
hahaha <333
I probably will continue it SOMEDAY XD

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paddyabroad October 19 2007, 20:29:31 UTC
You're too young for NC-17 so this was damn cute and nice. You should continue writing, if it is not this fandom than anything else, because writing is fun and good at the same time ^^

Thank you for writing this for me after all the time, there is just one thing that made me wonder... Haya locked his door, how did Ryu get in?? Oh and why is there always a red light??? sounds like love hotel

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xruki_x October 19 2007, 20:35:49 UTC
well The room is actually Ryu's room remember? its normal for him to have a key to the room, besides.. I was more thinking about a Lock and you can lock without key from inside.. *sweatdrops* should have distribed it better..

red light. It's some kind of myth i read somewhere before~ about some castle located in the forest and at night there would always be a red light o.o;

Love hotel for HayaRyu isnt bad?xDDD

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cattilein October 19 2007, 21:28:39 UTC
Kawaii! They are so shy. I like it. Please write a sequel?
Hayato x Ryu pairing storys are my favourites. XD

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xruki_x October 20 2007, 09:26:55 UTC
uhm.. well, actually I don't think that i'll write a sequel for this fic, sorry @__@

&thanks for commeting :)

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sollasollew11 October 19 2007, 21:46:07 UTC
Not to be rude but if you're talking about the color, it's crimson not chrimson and vacation not vakation. I'm pointing those out because typos in the title and summary will probably detract people from giving the fic a chance.

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xruki_x October 20 2007, 09:23:18 UTC
haha, it's not rude..
I knew i made alot of stupid mistakes in this fanfic so yeah -__-;;
it was my first in a half year the time, so my grammer and all got worse ;_;

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vani13 October 19 2007, 21:50:20 UTC
Ruki-chan me liked it a lot *glomps* It was really cute~

Yes, yes, you definitely should keep writing~ whenever you have time becuase it'll indeed be a distraction :D

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xruki_x October 20 2007, 09:28:23 UTC
*hugs vani-chan*
I'm really unsure about fic writing lately ;_;
since my grammer is like asdfa and i mix up a lot of words *cries*
but i'll probably continue writing~:)

thanks for liking ;D

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