I Remember...

Feb 12, 2012 20:22

Title: I Remember...
Author: xsilentserenity
Pairing(s): Haehyuk, broken!Haehyuk, Sihyuk, impliedbroken!Sihyuk
Rating: PG-13 
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense, Character Death(?), implied smut
Warnings: major angst, character death (but I'm not saying if he really dies!), implied smut
Disclaimer: Such a pity.
Summary: We promised each other than we would always love each ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, genre: romance, length: oneshot, best on journal (recommended), genre: drama, pairing: siwon/eunhyuk, fic: i remember, genre: angst, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk

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salsajnverde February 13 2012, 05:12:45 UTC
The Grammys were on when I read this, and Katy Perry was performing "Part of me"; the lyrics really go well with this story, which was ironic.

Cause you chewed me up
and spit me out
like I was poison in your mouth

But this was beautifully written, and so sad ;_;

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 02:44:21 UTC
I love how people are connecting this song to song lyrics. It really makes me happy.

Thank you so much!

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tesa11 February 13 2012, 06:42:39 UTC
omg...I got dizzy...you success make me cry this time bb...T^T ( ... )

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tesa11 February 13 2012, 14:27:08 UTC
after I make my self to re-read it through again..I find my favorite sentences..
"...Time moves on… I know that now… so please, move on with it. I remember begging you to return, but you never did, so maybe it’s time for me to leave by myself..."
"...Thank you for loving me while it lasted. I’ll always love you to make up for it..."
and I still cry re-read it T^T

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 23:26:51 UTC
owhh! Those are your favorites? And they make you cry? bbbb~~ [huggles you!]

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 02:45:50 UTC
d'awww... [hands you tissues] I'm so glad you loved it so much, and how you felt was how I wanted you to feel and that fact makes me so fluttering inside that I'm so happy right now!

I'm glad it was great for a trial comeback! Thank you thank you thank you!

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ditasav February 13 2012, 07:00:27 UTC
This is so BEAUTIFUL...
I can feel the emotion,
it broke my heart imaging Donghae in that state :(

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 02:46:14 UTC
I'm glad you felt what I wanted my readers to feel. That makes me really happy.

Thank you!

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douliette February 13 2012, 08:12:35 UTC
That was one brief hiatus xD

BUT THAT WAS SO SAD ;____; I CRIED ;_____;
It was so melancholic and regretful and WAE NOBODY SAID ANYTHING TO HYUK? SERIOUSLY GUISE. WAE?
And Hae's reaction... It feels so real. Every steps, the sadness, the break down... ;__;
AND THE END. I KNEW IT. BUT ARGH.

Imma pretend I didn't read the last paragraph and everything went fine /oblivious/

BUT SERIOUSLY it was beautiful ;_; <3

ans take your time for the rest <3 appreciate what you're doing, it's the most important thing~

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 02:48:04 UTC
Heyy Jules-unnie~ (gosh, i love that name!) Yeah, it was a pretty brief hiatus. I'm not sure how quick my updates are going to be, since I write oneshot fairly quickly (it's just those updates I get behind on XD), but I'm hoping to get back to a normal pace soon!^^

Yeah... really sad. xD you can't do that! haha, you crazy unnie~~~ it ended how it ended. o.O as horrible as that is. :3

Thank you bb~

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douliette February 14 2012, 21:53:59 UTC
ㅋㅋㅋ~ It's definitely one of my coolest names :D <3 Sankyu agaiiin~~
Don't force yourself ^^ I like it better actually, when I get home and I'm not expecting anything but TADAAAH~ I've got plenty to read *^*

Meeeh I can't? ;_____; Okay then ;____; /brb drowning in my tears/
Naaah I was just kidding, I'd never do that. I only do if I think the ending is... well. when it gives you that "I only had like 30 seconds to think and write about it so here you go haha gtg bye" feeling. But yours.. It's a perfect ending. THOUGH SAD SAD SAD.

But you're welcome dear <3

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 23:28:27 UTC
I'm happy it doesn't have that kind of ending, because really, I pulled out the entire fic from "I found myself climbing..." in like... 30 minutes. o.o

Thanks again~

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snow_meow February 13 2012, 09:02:04 UTC
it is so sad and so tragic.

The moment Hyuk remembers, Donghae has already made that leap of death.

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xsilentserenity February 14 2012, 02:48:24 UTC
very tragic, and i'm glad you saw that.

Thank you so much!

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