once, there was a time...

[xsilentserenity]

title: once, there was a time...
author: xsilentserenity
pairing: kyuhyun/sungmin (+broken)
rating: pg(-13)
genre: angst, drama
warnings: implied abuse
disclaimer: Such a pity.
summary: There was a time when Sungmin loved Kyuhyun enough for the both of them. But that time passed, and all that was left was farewells.
requested by: lindsey (tumblr)

Comments

[envybleedsgreen]

Kyuhyun was abusing Sungmin, and then Sungmin couldn't take it anymore and left? Even though I hate it when the characters don't end up together, the way that you wrote this made it okay. Sungmin was smart enough to suck it up and leave. He didn't need a person who didn't treat him well in his life.

I APPROVE.

[xsilentserenity]

YES! that's what i was going for! i don't like it when people forgive horrible people in the name of love. everyone needs to know where to cut it.

thank you! and i approve of your dp. veerry nice <333

[envybleedsgreen]

I agree! I've seen my friends torn up over their boyfriends or ex-boyfriends. I have to admit, the ones who have dated all have terrible taste in men. All the boys they've dated were jerks, but they didn't listen to me when I said so. They should have broken up with the ones instead of being dumped. Their so-called "love" stopped them though. Honestly, girls [and boys] need to know where to draw the line. If they treat you and your loved ones like trash, then they need to go. End of story.

I like yours too! ^^ Very cute. :3

[xsilentserenity]

um. it's lke your'e talking to me omfg. i admit that i went too far, i fell too hard, i got hurt really badly and i just clung on because i loved him so much. but now i'm over him and well... durammaaa~~

aww thanks <33

[i_iz_cobra]

Spot~ I shall be back~ ^ ^

[i_iz_cobra]

I'm glad that Sungmin left. Staying in an abusive relationship because you're in "love" is not good for anyone.If you can leave, leave and don't look back even though it'll hurt.
But then Kyuhyun finding him and telling him that he was missed, that doesn't fly either and I'm glad that Sungmin just left him with a "Sorry, Kyuhyun" on his mind.

Your angst writing is so good. I'm really looking forward to your updates. ^ ^

[xsilentserenity]

mhm mhm! i agree! :) i'm glad you understood that!

and thank you! i'm looking forward to writing them but i'm really busy ;alksjdlfkj

[i_iz_cobra]

Of course. I've never had that kind of relationship, but my friend (same one I mentioned in the comment on suicide lists) had a bad relationship with a guy. It was more emotional abuse rather than physical, but they were on and off and she kept going back to him when I was trying to convince her it wasn't good for her.

Take your time bb~ I know we all have lives outside of lj and writing. ^^ But if you're ever lurking around LJ, I may have some stuff up soon. Is that shameless self promotion..? I don't even.. just thought I'd let you know. XD

Suck that, Kyuhyun!

[aendimnida]

I got drawn to it although there were no dialogues. It's just so good... painfully good :((

Re: Suck that, Kyuhyun!

[xsilentserenity]

alkjldf owhh thank you. this fic didn't seem to want any dialogues. it just kinda went with the style ;~;

thank you. ^^

[yuue04]

I REALLY HAVE NO IDEA ON HOW SHOULD I REACT TO THIS
BECAUSE YEAH I AM BIASED THEN DEEP DOWN IN MY HEART, THERE IS THIS SMALL TINY SPACE WISHING MING TO ACCEPT KYU *POUTS*
IDK WHY PEOPLE PREFER TO LEARN IT THE HARD WAY
STUPID KYUHYUN *SMACK HIM HARD* IF HE IS REALLY PRECIOUS FOR YOU, ACT LIKE HE DOES!
ABUSING HIM IS ONE THING, BUT WAITING UNTIL HE LEFT YOU ONLY THEN YOU REALIZE HOW MUCH HE MEANT FOR YOU IS JUST DOUBLE STUPID AND BLIND!
THANKS FOR SHARING HUN!!!

[xsilentserenity]

YESS i knew you would feel that way, all sasd that's it's broken!kyumin :c

but yes, kyu is just stupid! thank you!

[fickleminded9]

YAH, KYU!!! What is wrong with you?!
Oh, well -- at least Sungmin made the right choice in the end! :)
TBH, this was my first time reading abusive!Kyu... LOL.
Amazing as always, jagiya! Oh, and this line's my favourite: "There was a time when Sungmin had forgotten about how Kyuhyun used to make him feel and focused on what Kyuhyun made him feel now-pain, pain, pain."

:DDDD

[xsilentserenity]

yes~ min made the right choice! i'm glad you liked it! :) thank you!!!

and yes, i love that line too i'm glad it was your fav! thanks bb