#20 Thoughts After

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Title: Thoughts After
Prompt: #20
Author: Anonymous
Pairing(s): Suho/Sehun, Chen/Kyungsoo, Xiumin/Luhan
Rating: PG-13
Genre (s): slice of life!au, romance
Length: 3.949 words
Summary: Joonmyun taking a short trip down memory lane ft. Sehun
Warning(s): -
Author’s note: I just hope I did justice to the prompt! Have a great summer everyone~

Comments

[thejannikku]

Ahhh I thought it was gonna end sadly I was feeling the angst because the frame was broken idk I was expecting depression or something but I'm glad it wasn't HAAHAHA
I loved the way the story was told in all those fragments and I it was simple but sweet <3333
I'm glad Junmyeon changed his mind and open his heart after all, it's true that people come in and out of life all the time and makes you don't want to get too attached ;;
Anyway I liked this a lot <3

[misszhangyixing]

For a moment there I thought this will be angsty and sad and just painful in general -with how you started the story - I thought they had a fight or something! And i feel like it was kind of mean for you to write how nice their relationship progressed only for them to break up in the end (because I was so sure this won't end up happily) but then the ending proved me wrong! Ahhh very clever! (And I feel like the summary should have been an enough clue lol)

Anyways, I can relate to Joonmyun to be honest. I'm also that kind of person who doesn't express my true feelings because I've also experienced people leaving and I get attached easily so I prefer to be somewhat guarded. And I'm so happy that Junmyeon took a risk and be with Sehun!

I enjoyed reading this although I was anxious of the ending.