Comments | xwaltzforvenus: experimental weirdness, part 3

xwaltzforvenus

experimental weirdness, part 3

Jan 08, 2009 00:11

Title: goddamn, none still.
Rating: Still R, I suppose
A/N: I'm warning everyone right now that I have absolutely no background in action-sequence writing. And I still have like, zero ideas where this is going.

part one
part two

( part this )

genre: au, fandom: oc, genre: experimental, genre: woe, fic: supernatural

Comments 24

taylorforever January 8 2009, 06:24:40 UTC

"That`s so cliché" - I really like that. Still very creepy and extremely good.

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 06:35:27 UTC

Thanks!

beege22 January 8 2009, 06:47:44 UTC

Freaking awesome. Seth snarks, Ryan kicks butt and Taylor comforts.

I'm interested in seeing how you play Taylor's reaction - with her personality she could try to be the voice of reason or take the pragmatic yet very open minded stance that's typical for her and say 'okay, show me proof'.

And I really hope the use of your fanged Autumn Reeser icon isn't a hint of things to come.

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 06:59:02 UTC

Like I've said before, I know Summer's definite plot in this, but I still don't know what I'm... doing with Taylor yet. And for that matter, I don't really know what I'm doing with Seth and Ryan, either. But for right now, the fanged Taylor is just because it's my only vamp icon.

Now I have the urge to go make more. Damnit.

beege22 January 8 2009, 11:48:06 UTC

So is Summer going to be the perpetually sceptical one or come to a sticky end or what? I figure that if she's the one whose role you're sure of it's because her story somes to an end of some sort.

Oh, and your action scenes seemed fine.

P.S: Reading this story is already causing me to envision Hendricks going bugshit (even more than he already is) when the Seth/Ryan monster hunting show comes to the attention of the FBI (you just know Seth would enjoy messing with him :)

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 15:15:40 UTC

I never said Seth and Ryan were going to hunt... and Summer's plot is cemented, Taylor's... less so.

fifimom January 8 2009, 07:17:49 UTC

amazing update,thanks for sharing.

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 07:19:34 UTC

Thanks!

kazfloyd January 8 2009, 12:36:50 UTC

That was great! Love the gay vamp hitting on Ryan too. LOL.

Looking forward to see what you decide to do with Taylor.

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 15:14:07 UTC

Thanks!

viper209n January 8 2009, 16:12:11 UTC

OMG! They killed Edward!!!!!

Just kidding. Still very good.

xwaltzforvenus January 8 2009, 16:24:44 UTC

Ha! No, no Edward in this story (mostly because I can't stand all this Twilight nonsense. Vampires don't *sparkle*, damnit)

Thanks!