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[xwaltzforvenus]

Title: Circular Motion Takes It Straight to the Point
Rating: R
For: finlee 
Sentence: Marissa finds Ryan's journal and she's not too happy about what she reads
A/N: I am so sorry. This started out fine and it just... I'm sorry. It's rated for darkness.

Comments

[smc36]

You...
You...
YOU KILLED RYAN???
Wow. That was wow, but YOU KILLED RYAN!!!
:>)
Like I didn't already *hate* Marissa!

[xwaltzforvenus]

I know! I'm sorry! I tried not to but... it just happened.

[oc_gambit2]

"just happened"? I thought that was gonna be Marissa's excuse.

Sadly, I fear that something just like this would have happened had she lived and they stayed together. Just when Ryan was finally realizing he had to start living for himself--!*sob*

Character deaths are always difficult for me to read, but it's a solid story. Well done. *you evil woman!*

[kazfloyd]

OMG, you killed Ryan!!

I think you wrote a very accurate assement of Ryan and Marissa's relationship. Very nicely done.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I tried warning you... I said it was going to be horrible.

But thank you for reading!

[60schic]

Holy Crap! When you said 'dark', you meant DARK.

I'm sorry it was Ryan. I was really ok with it when I thought you were heading for The Clueless Swizzle Stick Offing Herself. The Bot as a murderer? I guess it would have only been a matter of time.

[xwaltzforvenus]

You know what's sad? It didn't even occur to me to have the whiny bitch commit the big S. Damn.

[60schic]

She was probably too much of a Drama Queen in your fic to do it - she'd need to be around to see the results of her craziness. She was not in touch with reality

[oc_gambit2]

"...it would have only been a matter of time" *nods vigorously*

[xwaltzforvenus]

I hate her too, which was why this was surprisingly easy to write.

(and yes, you may get more soon. I have an idea in my head. Let's see if it pans out)

[brandywine421]

\o/ I really enjoyed this!

[xwaltzforvenus]

Thank you!