Loop - brigit's_flame

[xxemocupcakexx]

Title: Loop
Chapters: 1/1
Author: Asia Perkins aka xxemocupcakexx 
Genre: drama
Rating: PG
Synopsis: An inner struggle rears its ugly head.

Comments

[xxemocupcakexx]

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

[alienemerald]

*faints*
Ahhhhhh, gosh you are a good writer! My eyes were glued the second I started reading this!
I'll look for more of your entries :D

[xxemocupcakexx]

Haha well thank you. I wasn't really feeling this piece, but I'm glad other people do! Thanks for reading.

[lorele]

Wow... the struggle with an obsession-compulsion. I can't say I understand it myself, but your writing gives me this feeling like "this is what it's like". If I don't know, I have a hint now.

It turns into a complex form with social anxiety at the door, too. Perhaps a metaphor about the concern of leaving her own emotional self unlocked results in her quickly re-locking it again...

This line: "Gina slid to brush her toes against the carpet. It was shaggy and slightly rough, which resembled her life." I loved that little detail, it was -her- starting point and I didn't attach to her until she was free, unobserved, a quantum particle, a free radical within Schrodinger's cat box.

It hits another point that they say Einstein couldn't open a door by himself... not to say it wasn't true, but perhaps the spirit is met with its own insurmountable obstacles in form of a door that it must face on its own...

This is quite rich.

[xxemocupcakexx]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I suffer from it myself, but it's very mild. My parents both have it as well. We all have different kinds though. Thanks for reading!

[lacruciverbiste]

What a clever idea for the prompt! And OCD as a monster inside. Very, very cool.

Good luck in the polls this week! Look forward to reading more from you.
~Kate
BF Week 2 Entry: “Lazy river”

[xxemocupcakexx]

Thanks for reading! Good luck to you too!