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yamitoyoru

Days of despair (betaed!) - Chapter 1, part 2

Dec 07, 2009 01:45

( Days of despair - chapter 1, part 2 )

rape, hichigo, ichigo, renji, hichi/ichi, fic, renji/ichigo, yaoi, bleach

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dragon5174 December 7 2009, 21:32:18 UTC

Wow, and this is unbetaed. Holy Sh*t this was good.

yamitoyoru December 7 2009, 21:55:12 UTC

Thank you very much. I tried my best to make it readable while my betas are busy.

babyluw December 7 2009, 22:22:40 UTC

I'm so glad that I pressed the link to this story, I don't think I would have if you hadn't mentioned Renji...
I'm not so glad that the clock is 2330 and I have school tomorrow but, whatever, it was totally worth it.

Oh, god, the angst! And I lovet hat it's all fron Hichigos POV, how you make him "show his love". So fabolous. I'll be waiting for the next chapter <3

yamitoyoru December 7 2009, 22:31:24 UTC

It's a good thing I have him here then. Thank you Ren!~
And, um sorry for keeping you up this late. My clock reads the same hour and I have uni tomorrow too so... =P

I'm glad you liked this ^^. Even though it's unbetaed and there are probably lots of mistakes.

Anyways~

Thank you for your kind words *bows* I'll make sure that the next chapter will be out soon (with even more angst!).

And thank you for making my night! Your comment will surely give me energy to study!~ *loves*

darktower6 December 7 2009, 23:40:18 UTC

this is AWESOME...
i LOVE how its written its clear you've put a lot of effort into this!
I'm really looking forward to future chapters, thank you so much for writing!

yamitoyoru December 7 2009, 23:49:38 UTC

Thank you so much!~

I'll try hard not too disappoint with the next chapters.

darktower6 December 7 2009, 23:52:09 UTC

keep going as you have been and you definately won't! thanks again!! *it was so distracting...i'm going to be thinking about it all morning now!*

yamitoyoru December 8 2009, 00:01:57 UTC

well, writing this was kinda addictive. difficult, but addictive and if not for homework, tests and work I'd be working on the next chap already.

xD distracting? any tasty mental images you like?

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yamitoyoru December 8 2009, 07:20:05 UTC

Thank you!~

As soon as this will get betaed I'll start working on the next chap (which might actually take a while).

zealot1138 December 8 2009, 08:33:10 UTC

Next chapter please! :grabby hand:

yamitoyoru December 8 2009, 08:43:30 UTC

weren't you supposed to be busy? =P I'm waiting for your opinion on it and your answer if you'd like to beta it. ^^

zealot1138 December 8 2009, 09:03:45 UTC

LOL - I know! I just got in tonight and I have to be honest, I had to skim a lot. But I will give it my full attention tomorrow!
But since you've posted it unbeta'd, you can do the next bit unbeta'd too, right? XD

yamitoyoru December 8 2009, 17:49:13 UTC

Can't wait ^^.

Yes and no. The style after the first chapter will have to change quite a bit, since it will be more about what happens around Ichigo and I'll be doing some nasty things to him. Plus, I'm kinda stuck. Tests and stress kill my muse.