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Days of despair (betaed!) - Chapter 1, part 2

Dec 07, 2009 01:45

( Days of despair - chapter 1, part 2 )

rape, hichigo, ichigo, renji, hichi/ichi, fic, renji/ichigo, yaoi, bleach

Comments 28

maru_d_kusanagi December 8 2009, 17:17:35 UTC

I've already said in FF.net, this is a twisted fic. But I liked it a lot!

yamitoyoru December 8 2009, 17:49:41 UTC

twisted in what sense? I hope it's in a good way ^^.

sberrychan December 10 2009, 04:27:45 UTC

Just as good if not better than the other one! The emotion...! You are too good at making it seem real, I'm jealous.

Lol Hichigo is so sweet to think of his "King" and help him, yet he's trying to break him at the same time. I don't understand what I just typed lol

yamitoyoru December 10 2009, 06:41:23 UTC

I'm very happy that the feelings conveyed are clear and that you can feel them - I worked hard for the story to be felt, so it's great to hear that I did well.

But I think I know what you mean. For Hichigo breaking and helping Ichi is the very same thing.

alicefactor December 16 2009, 07:10:14 UTC

i loved it. this has never been my favorite pairing but you just bumped it up.

yamitoyoru December 16 2009, 13:50:44 UTC

Thanks! ^^ Glad I managed to spread the love ^^.

ferler February 16 2010, 14:27:44 UTC

Shirosaki teased not just Ichigo but me as well! I swear I felt his breath near my ear, too, his touches... *goes out into the snow*
I hope to read more!

yamitoyoru February 17 2010, 09:43:22 UTC

Thanks ^^
Yeah, Hichi is one big tease... one of his best traits XD
I can't wait to have the time to work on the next chapter, the lack of time to write is killing me =(