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[yellowdartvader]

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[kaylle]

I really do like this :) Does it have to be longer than this? I know you were afraid it was going to blow up into something long and epic, but could this be it? I mean, there are some unfinished sentences here and there {g}, but the conversation is complete. (And you're right, I don't know if they should be discussing too much politics on their last day together. That would definitely make this a longer story!)

[yellowdartvader]

I never managed to go to sleep. I caught the writing bug after I brushed my teeth. LOL! I think you have a point. It is a lot clearner than I thought it was and it isn't missing much by not adding the political mumbo jumbo going through my head. I certainly don't want to have another epic on my hands when I am still working on the story I started right after MD. I think having them mention politics is enough and I don't need to go into the why the heck did they just have an army waiting question. Because that would have been way too much. LOL. Thanks for reading it and thanks for the sugestion. I might actually be able to finish tomorrow. Yay. (having a February challenge done in February. Wow.)

[lazypadawan]

Very nice story. The double entendres were cute ;).

[yellowdartvader]

Thanks. The double entendres were sort of . . . unintended. LOL! I didn't even realize they were there until about the third time I read it through. (I might be a little dense. ;))

[miyeko]

Well-written dialog. Good story! ^_^

[yellowdartvader]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[mlledefer]

Nice one:)
*still smiling* very nice one:):)

[yellowdartvader]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story.