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yellowdartvader

Life's Trials - Part 4

Mar 10, 2007 20:08

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frostbit_sky March 11 2007, 21:45:40 UTC

What a sweet proposal.

RE'Some time later, Anakin’s breath came in rapid gasps, but he managed to say, “Thank you. Where did you learn how to do this?”

She shrugged. “I asked Cordé.”

LOL I can only imagine what that was about

yellowdartvader March 12 2007, 05:24:11 UTC

LOL! It was *completely* innocent. I think Corde taught Padme how to wrestle and pin a guy twice her size.

frostbit_sky March 13 2007, 01:23:21 UTC

LMAO My mind was *Totally* in the gutter on that one.

I guess Corde had a lot of older brothers.
They're tiny girls.

yellowdartvader March 13 2007, 05:01:47 UTC

ROTFL!! I was just kidding about the wrestling. Kind of. In the original version, there was a very gutter-esque part there. Then I thought about Padme trying to broach the subject to Corde and getting embarassed and turning it into a hypothetical question about wrestling.

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queen_meep March 12 2007, 23:05:19 UTC

That instance with Corde's recommendation really didn't seem all that innocent... not necessarily a bad thing. LOL

What a sweet proposal... I love how your dialogue resembles the cute sappiness that they had in the movies.

yellowdartvader March 12 2007, 23:57:38 UTC

Oh, yeah, in the original version, it was FAR less innocent. ;) Actually it was some of the best nfic I ever wrote . . . lol!

Glad you have enjoyed the story so far.