Singing Rain [2/2]

[yeolcarp]

Title: Singing Rain
Rating: PG
Focus/Pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Words: 7000+
Summary: Youngjae's iPhone app shows no forecast of rain.

Comments

[irumichan]

this is so beautiful~
i mean, is so spontaneous and everything
and tipsy daehyun is cute and of course his nonstop talking too. he NEVER stops talking, just when he's eating hehe and his story is so adorable too searching for missing pets so cuuute~ youngjae is lovely (i love everything here)
is a really lovely story :)
idk what else to say <3

[yeolcarp]

thank you for the lovely comment :) I had so much fun writing Dae, he's just got so much dumb and full of possibility lol. Thanks for reading!

[akmongs]

omg this was so cute ;~~~~;

i love daejae but i don't usually read fics of them, but i read a couple of yours already and this was really lovely and beautiful!! i really like the idea, i suppose the prompt included dancing in the rain, and your writing fit it so well!! the fic starts slowly and then grows, just like the rain, and it gives a really nice, relaxed, feeling

your descriptions and details of the settings were amazing (the rain, the street lights reflecting on the wet pavement) and i appreciate how spontaneous if not out of the blue daejae's relationship builds kkk, i don't know i really love this sort of stories where despite being strangers two people seem to fall together and fit like puzzle pieces

i love daehyun's character. i think for a b.a.p writer characterizing daehyun is the funniest part (i had a chance too and it just worked so well) and here he's so carefree and loud and he never stops talking, just like in real life, i felt immediately attached to him (he's also kind of an idiot, bc last time i checked i

[yeolcarp]

this comment is so long, I don't deserve it ; ~ ; I'm glad you enjoyed my fic \o/ and yes the prompt I got was a song fic prompt lol. Daehyun is everyone's favorite character to write for reals, right next to Himchan. Hell. All of B.A.P is so dumb and fun. Your kind words make me so happy, really thanks for them :) and yes they got pneumonia and a cold but they can just cuddle that away <3

[bictory]

WE'RE JUST DANCING IN THE RAAAAIN
I'M READY YOU'RE VERY TIPSY BABYYY

ahahaa I literally was singing that in my head the entire time they met (and lol so you did adapt it to the lyrics xD)

DAEHYUN IS MY FAVORITE can I have one to drag me around in the rain and make me pay for his double meals and save me from drowning in the stormy ocean ;___; pet agency Daehyun is so precious and alsdkfjhg BEING PAID IN FOOD that is brilliant!! I want oneeee ;A;

[yeolcarp]

Looks like a job well done then! Woop. You may have Daehyun if you want to go bankrupt and have random animals brought home (not all of them are house trained D:). Thanks for the lovely comment, too \o/

[mightymischief]

this is seriously a breath taking fic because of its flowy beautiful descriptions and how your characters are such carefree beings. i love daehyun's character, I LOVE HOW HE'S WRITTEN SERIOUSLY, at first i assumed he's some sort of celestial being but then he started to open his mouth. but things just definitely got better from there!

AND GOD, just reading this relaxes me because i love dancing in the rain and there waltzes in my favorite otp getting kicked out in every resto they go into because they're drenching. every scene has gotten me craving for more and the wit as well. DAEHYUNS JUST ENDLESSLY TALKING ABOUT WHATEVER GOES IN HIS MIND.

and just when i thought it can't get better they go into the stormy ocean :-( and everything :-( about it :-( is so :-( sweet :-( and fun :-( and pretty :-(

"Youngjae turns to look at Daehyun. His eyes trace his side-profile, admiring the curvature of his nose and lips, not missing how they shine. Daehyun turns to stare back at him and he sees the reflection of his own feelings in Daehyun’s

[yeolcarp]

your icon. it is glorious. i can't step staring at it. but that aside, thank you for the lovely comment. daehyun is seriously always a joy to write in every fic. he's just got so much dumb to work with lol thanks for reading \o/ your words make me super duper happy.

[suitofarmour]

ahh playing at the beach is so cute~~ this whole fic is super adorable! i like that the just meet up and go and do things. it's so sweet <3 and ofc not giving up until they finally find a place to eat <3

He hears Daehyun laugh before feeling his wet bangs being moved aside and a kiss placed on his forehead.

“Hey, man. Only one kiss a day and I already gave you CPR.” he jokes.

daehyun is such a spazz omg~ but i like this line a lot

“We should come back here sometime in the day.” Youngjae thinks aloud.

Daehyun eagerly nods his head, the alcohol once streaming through his system most likely having filtered away. Youngjae assumes so thanks to the boy’s now less than active mouth. But maybe the two are just comfortable with each other and words aren’t even that necessary.

He had asked him earlier if he was having fun and Youngjae’s sure that he is.eee i just like this whole part, it's so cute aojsdfakl

[yeolcarp]

Thanks for commenting \o/ I'm glad you think I got the daejae feel :)) hopefully I can keep that up in future fics too <3