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Hue/Saturation

Jul 29, 2010 19:14

TITLE: Hue/Saturation
CHARACTER: Ryo
RATING: R, for drug-use and suicide
WORD COUNT: 1,012
SUMMARY: Ryo seeks an escape, and he finds it with friends. (For sanjihan, who gave me "Kanjani8/NewS - a species of delirium" as a prompt, and for some reason this morning I woke up wanting to write a Ryo/drug fic, and this is how I took it.)

( Hue/Saturation )

indiv.: ryo, #one-shot, r: r, genre: au

Comments 26

sanjihan July 30 2010, 01:33:28 UTC

...... This was SO awesome!! I have no idea how you came up with this but I might be a little bit in love... <3 <3 <3

Ryo doesn't ever bother cutting the white pills in half; he likes the full effect.
I reread this sentence three times because I was just in awe. It tells you just how desperate he is for the escape but, like the rest of this story, it's so relaxed about it. It's hard to think of it as a bad thing when it's so chill and matter-of-fact. I love that you achieved that so effortlessly.

Loves those crazy fuckers that always pop up when those sweet bits touch his tongue and dissolve.XD I just like the wording ( ... )

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:23:17 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I was a little worried, since some people really don't like drug use, but the prompt... was... so... PERFECT. For the weirdness that I wanted to write, anyways.

And, of course, K8 and NEWS would be different drugs ;)

speckled_writer July 30 2010, 02:56:22 UTC

Oh wow!

This is a really intesting concept and beautifully done. Loved it.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:23:41 UTC

Thanks ♥

ryogrande July 30 2010, 04:23:45 UTC

i... have no words.

please sign up for je_squickfic.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:23:28 UTC

Your wish is my command.

epicwaters July 30 2010, 06:18:46 UTC

Awesome story and an awesome way to tell it. The imagery and the note of pills, how each one brought him somewhere else that was familiar. Really liked it ^^

thanks for sharing!

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:25:03 UTC

I felt so inspired when I thought up the things with the pills~

Thank you : )

un_desdem0n_a July 30 2010, 07:26:13 UTC

This fic. Just. So wonderfully written, and the pills taking him to AU!JE and Ryo just wanting to escape his real life, I-- :|
He killed himself with the purity and rainbow crack, omfg Ryo.

yey_yey July 31 2010, 02:25:27 UTC

I almost felt bad killing him, but he's so much happier that way...