I really love this so far. You've been writing it out well--it's not rushed, but not dragging along either. Perfect pacing! Everyone's IC, and the characters' interactions are just so...terrific!
All in all, great chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Great new chapter! Hmmm, so Ed's too immature for relationships? Or... But I do have to agree with him; Al's the nice one, they should go for him! And of course Winry would fall for a guy with automail - sounds exactly right! Poor Kain is gonna get his feelings hurt, though.
XD XD XD XD The moment with Kain is just made of 10 sorts of awesome. And the female hunt for Ed species makes for a good laugh. ^^ The truce part, I get what they're saying, but the Ed/Win fan in me won't give up hope. Sure, I wasn't expected them to jump each other, still... ;) I'm hoping the next chapter will be just as great. No pressure. :D
Hi! I was wondering if there was going to be an update to this story some time soon. I suddenly remembered this fic earlier today and, after checking sicarius' LJ page to see who the author was, was curious about what had become of it. Will this fic be continued? Will Ed and Al go traveling as per sicarius' prompt request? Will there be any pairings in this fic, either gay or straight? Whatever the answers to these quetions, I look forward to your response! :)
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You used the different emotions well, the awkwardness vs the wtf I'm not a father vs the fammilliarness of Winry and Ed.
And it read very well and quite IC and...
I can't wait to see the next bit.
(And yes. Why DO they all go for the jerk of the brothers, rather than the nice one? XD)
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All in all, great chapter. Can't wait to read more!
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I'm hoping the next chapter will be just as great. No pressure. :D
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