Fic: Dawn (1/4)

[yixsh]

Title: Dawn, Part 1 of 3
Pairings/Characters: Edward, Roy
Rating: M/R
Genre: Drama, Angst
Spoilers: None - Alternate ending, TWT?
Word Count: +/- 7700
Warnings: Language, violence, gore.
Summary:  Ed and Roy are stuck in a war zone. Gratuitous hurt!Roy for the sake of hurt!Roy ensues.
Notes: Once upon a time, I started this fic for

Comments

[evil_freckle]

Wow, this is really good! :D

[yixsh]

Thanks! ♥

[vwl]

YAY I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH

[yixsh]

YAY ILU

[vwl]

OMG ILU2
LET'S GET MARRIED

[shanola22]

SO glad you are continuing this! It's not very nice to leave them out in the snow like that! *g*

[yixsh]

It is very cold, yes. D: Sorry to say it won't be much warmer in the next bit though. ;D

Besides, they had that nice campfire to keep them warm in this bit (Get it! The camp...was on fire! Campfire! Haha whoooo *is shot*).

Thanks for reading!

[patterson1219]

Fantastic! And you have a ff.net account? I absolutely LOVE that site... now I'll have to go check out your stories on there! As for this fic? Wonderful details... the results of Ed's sleeping habits in the cold, the reaction to the death of the Drachman soldier, the process of trying to carry Mustang. Every single item was well thought out and clearly expressed in your writing... eagerly awaiting the next update, now I just gotta figure out if I wanna rely on livejounal or ff.net... :)

[yixsh]

Thanks for the lovely comment! So glad you enjoyed the little things. :D ♥ My ff.net name is CaptainKase if you decide to follow me over there. ;3

[amethyst_koneko]

WHEW! For a minute there I didn't think Roy was going to wake up! I'm not sure which one I feel more for - Roy or Ed. They're both pretty bad off right now. I hope they can make it out of there without running into more Drachmans! I kinda wish they could steal one of those horses so they can make it to safety sooner! :) Please continue asap!

[yixsh]

It wasn't looking real good for Roy there, no. XD And trust me, things only get worse from here! Things will work out for our boys though, the way they...always...sorta do. :D;;;

Thanks for reading!