another triolet for your enjoyment.

Feb 01, 2005 12:36

the faucet of my life is you.
and i will only go so far,
turning hot and cold, turning black and blue.
the faucet of my life is you
pouring poetry, and draining me in lieu
of lukewarm rhymes gone sour.
the faucet of my life is you
and i. we’ll only go so far.

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rachy_baby February 1 2005, 15:03:12 UTC
"another triolet for your enjoyment."
you clever girl <3

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pistol_whip February 1 2005, 19:38:50 UTC
i dont get it. i dont think im as clever as youre giving me credit for.

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rachy_baby February 1 2005, 19:48:56 UTC
i like the rhyme you did. the slant rhyme? i mean, what rhymes with "troilet" besides "toilet?"

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