Dessy is right (haha Dess you gots a nickname from me) The first Bittersweet one is better.
I read your story instead of sleeping the other day and I cried. Stories don't make me cry... EVER. This one and the one titled Averi (where Taylor has cancer) are the TWO that made me sob like a little baby. (I admit that now ;\ My room mate came in and saw me crying... and I denied it) But that end, -points at the bittersweet one- Made me not cry.. as much.
I really am tempted to just go with the bittersweet ending but I feel as though I've messed my readers around quite enough by changing the ending just once, I don't think I could do it again...although I really want to.
I'd love to write more about my Tay and Zac's relationship, and I'd love to overcome the unaddressed issues such as Taylor's family, and the rape incident, I really would, but stop tempting me because I may end up giving in! :P
Oh my...I couldn't stop reading, even when I feared where this was headed. You're mean: you make boys cry! :P But what a great story alltogether; Read all of it in one day. It being 2:30 in the morning over here, I won't start on your other stories / sequel, but I sure will tomorrow :) And thanks for that alternate ending, maybe I'll be able to sleep now (and dream some happy Zaylor dreams, hehe)
Hey just finished your story. Sorry i'm late... a lot. but...Well, it's just... I always love angst cause it always make me feel more real than just happy fucking stuff. I can always put emotions into it and the feeling is good. But... this is too much. It's more than I can take. I do cry my heart out over this story. You made me realised that I can't stand Taylor's death even just in a "what if" set. If i'm not a Christian before and now i am. I'll pray for him to stay health and alive. I know it's really stupied but I guess it does mean something to me. Dear, your story is really great! Great structure, great description of feelings, great ending(i love the chapter 82 one, the last sentence makes me stop crying immediately. but I also love the description of Taylor's dying feelings.) You should keep on writting. You're talented! Love it!
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I read your story instead of sleeping the other day and I cried.
Stories don't make me cry... EVER. This one and the one titled Averi (where Taylor has cancer) are the TWO that made me sob like a little baby. (I admit that now ;\ My room mate came in and saw me crying... and I denied it) But that end, -points at the bittersweet one- Made me not cry.. as much.
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I'd love to write more about my Tay and Zac's relationship, and I'd love to overcome the unaddressed issues such as Taylor's family, and the rape incident, I really would, but stop tempting me because I may end up giving in! :P
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You're mean: you make boys cry! :P
But what a great story alltogether; Read all of it in one day.
It being 2:30 in the morning over here, I won't start on your other stories / sequel,
but I sure will tomorrow :)
And thanks for that alternate ending, maybe I'll be able to sleep now
(and dream some happy Zaylor dreams, hehe)
*Hugs*
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good story though.
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good story though.
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Sorry i'm late... a lot. but...Well, it's just...
I always love angst cause it always make me feel more real than just happy fucking stuff. I can always put emotions into it and the feeling is good.
But... this is too much. It's more than I can take. I do cry my heart out over this story. You made me realised that I can't stand Taylor's death even just in a "what if" set. If i'm not a Christian before and now i am. I'll pray for him to stay health and alive. I know it's really stupied but I guess it does mean something to me.
Dear, your story is really great! Great structure, great description of feelings, great ending(i love the chapter 82 one, the last sentence makes me stop crying immediately. but I also love the description of Taylor's dying feelings.) You should keep on writting. You're talented!
Love it!
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