If Only I Had...Chapter 11

[yukinonamida]

Title: If Only I Had...(Chapter 11/20)
Author: Yuki
Pairing: RyoShige
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Supernatural, Angst
Warnings: Violence/Abuse in chapters 1-6
Summary: Losing a loved one is one of the most difficult things to live with and we always wish for a way to bring that person back. However, there are some times when that person is

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[sanshinyia]

Yey for chapter 11 and that for once I'm here to read it right away! :D *wanders off to read*

[sanshinyia]

asdfjkl Shige got shot!O___O well... my sadistic side is very pleased.XD I'm so evil~ and he's definitely going to be more than fine when he has Ryo by his side.

Another new angle to the story from Jiro's pov~ Though there wasn't anything really surprising or something like that, it still clears up some details :D

My brains are quite stuck right now so I have nothing else to say.>.>' You didn't get an illegally long comment today, at least not from me.(X

[yukinonamida]

o_O I wonder if anyone else is pleased by that XD Ryo is all the medicine he needs~ *gets shot too for being cheesy* =P

Yeah, Jiro's POV was surprisingly exciting to write. I was able to show exactly how he was feeling and not from Ryo's pov.

Aww, maybe next time then? :P

[sanshinyia]

Somehow I doubt there are as evil people as I am.XDD noooo~ don't get shot D:

next time I'll try to be more creative and not as stuck ^__^ but now it's my bedtime finally~ (X G'night! &hearts

[kiariyuna]

That was really amazing. It's good to finally see Jiro's side of things, and being able to see that he is human, even though he's still a jerk to Shige.

I hope Asami's okay. :D

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one! ^^

[yukinonamida]

Thanks ^^ I figured that his POV is important to the story as well. He's jealous of Shige and never really cared about getting to know him :(

She won't be able to leave the hospital so she's not really "okay" but we just have to hope that she will be happy :)

Thanks for the comment ^_^

[waffi]

You are so fast!...I was just like: "whoa~" when I saw the new chapter xDDDD
and so much happend!! Ara threw Jiro out...that's really something! It's like: If he doesn't want to live with her, he has to die...that's so cruel!! I really don't really like Ara xD
And O.O OMG I was so afraid when this guy was there!~ and I'm still wondering where he did go after the shot...I feel like something will happen xDDDD
Ahhh~ SO EXCITING!!! <3

[yukinonamida]

I have this week off from school so I am able to devote time to writing ^^

Yeah, this chapter was crazy :P Ara wanted to kill whoever made him leave her...yeah she's pretty horrible.

Thanks for the comment ^^

[fairy_illusions]

Jiro's rather misunderstood, ne? I hate Ara to the core though D:< She's such a little ashgksdhghsdg RAWR. Why bring back Jiro and torture Ryo (hey I rhymed lol) if she isn't even that passionate about maintaining the relationship. *is angry still at Ara*

I hope Asami is okay (though I don't see how JiroAsami and RyoShige will work itself out lol a Double-date with only three people I suppose? XD)

Yay updates :] I'm so glad you have break. :D Makes the chapters arrive and show up on my flist that much sooner haha &hearts

[yukinonamida]

Asami also played a role in bringing the best out in him. ;) Ara never thought that he'd be cheating on her x_X Her decisions are rather impulsive.

Lol that would be interesting XD

Maybe I'll start working on chapter 12. I don't have much else to do anyway...*has no life*

[fairy_illusions]

Asami seems sweet though right now, I still can't come up with a face for her. All I can imagine is a girl with medium length hair and in sundresses LOL

Well Jiro isn't heartless so of course when he's deprived of love, he'd feel alone especially with RyoShige making loveydovey faces at each other rofl jk

*is mean but is glad that you have no life because that means the demanding fairy will get fic sooner :]*

[yukinonamida]

Lol XD I guess that is her image. She has a pretty normal face in my mind...:p

Exactly. I have to laugh at picturing RyoShige making "loveydovey faces" :P Oh this pair gives me so much amusement.

I just outlined chapter 12. =P Maybe 2 days? xD

[badbatazz]

shige would do anything for ryo and i guess jiro would do the same thing for asami. ara, just how evil can you be? thanks

[yukinonamida]

Yup. And Ara will do anything for her so-called "love". -_- She is pure evil :P

Thanks for the comment ^^