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yukinonamida

Snow and Ash - Eight Part 1B

Sep 16, 2009 11:05

I teleport to the door in the back of the room, or what’s left of it, and open it, running into the hallway and looking in every room I can. They all look the same. Jail cells. Some covered in blood from mutants whose bodies are not yet used to their powers, and some in shambles from those who came around to join us the last time - the ones who, ( Read more... )

-snow and ash

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rainy_fruit September 17 2009, 05:02:47 UTC

Mind control! That's pretty neat, but I do hope Shige learns to control his control. =) I was wondering the past week what Shige's power would be...Thanks for this!! Can't wait for the next part!

By the way, I didn't find this chapter choppy at all. Very well written as always!

~Kat

yukinonamida September 17 2009, 11:08:33 UTC

Mind control is really cool if it's controlled.

Ah~ :D That's good to hear. Thank you~ <3

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yukinonamida September 17 2009, 13:41:19 UTC

Ah, okay. I'll explain it more in the next part but basically, since Ryo's power is concentrated in his mind, and Shige can't block out anyone's minds yet, he is overwhelmed by the strength of Ryo's power.

x5yn4k4x September 24 2009, 02:02:21 UTC

I actually read this when you posted it, but didn't comment because my internet was like "No means no, bitch. D<" ._____. Fail.

Ooo~ Mind control, but I guess that sucks being around Ryo right now. I hope Shige can learn to control it quickly. Though I'm having trouble remembering who the time-control mutant was in SPoG. .____.

And yay, no more XMA~ Again~ :P

yukinonamida September 28 2009, 18:10:50 UTC

Lol the internet hates us sometimes. xD

He wasn't mentioned in 7PoG but he was one of the mutants they rescued from there.

waffi September 26 2009, 20:22:48 UTC

That's really something!!! Shige is the mind controlling mutant!! Gah~ I'm so excited...but I also hope that Shige will learn to control his new power...it must be confusing to hear the thought of everyone...Shige FIGHTING!!XD

yukinonamida September 28 2009, 18:11:41 UTC

I couldn't imagine hearing other people's thoughts @_@ It must be so weird.

wendy138 September 29 2009, 08:13:58 UTC

Loving this story. I don't remember the original story that well, but this is really good by itself. Can't wait to read the next part!

yukinonamida October 1 2009, 02:16:50 UTC

That's good to hear :D Even I have to look back at the original story sometimes. I hope you'll like it :)