LJ Idol Week 3

[yuniebaby]

Comments

[rayaso]

This was a lot of fun, and you did a great job with the dialogue. I didn't expect the conclusion, which was wonderful. Perhaps a good joke can (somewhat) reform someone!

[eternal_ot]

Ha! I didn't expect it to end that well *applause* and I was totally anticipating a fight. Amazing work! Well written.

[magazhchi]

I really enjoyed reading this. Keep me engaged throughout.

[sinnamongirl]

Thank you for your entry!

[penpusher]

Very amusing and really nice twist to avoid what would have been a small riot in the bar!