Love love love it!! Waiting for the final chapter.. Hope it will be happy ending.. Cutie Jae really deserve it. Even though you choose to use light and mild way to deliver the story, but somehow, I feel that Jae had going through hard times til he finally decided to accept his real feelings for his papa. Hehe, I could be wrong though. No matter what I love your fic and Jae is so adorable here. I hope I know what's in yunho's head, donno why, he's such a mystery for me. One thing I'm sure is how much he loves his precious udon head, hehe. Btw, just to make sure, so these scenes were the continuation of the part a, yes? When Jae was about 15, before the study abroad thing happen? So at this part, no '18th year' scene? o curious for the next chapter, update soon pls.. :)
yaaaay juicy long comment thank you bb :D I agree with you about that, originally I planned this story to be plain goofy, but somehow those love feelings are difficult to ignore and since it's incest the struggle just shows. I'm glad you noticed it and liked hehe.
I decided to make this fic wholly as Jae POV cause I haven't done that before, I use the third person in my other stories, so Yunho's thoughts will be revealed by Jae himself when he finally understands why his father pushed him away.
Exactly, this part B is 15 year old Jae finally making sexy with Yunconda. The following scenes after Yunho said that he was sending Jae to Tokyo are in the next chapter.
Finally the juicy part :D i admit i was confused a little coz every time Jae dream about making love with Yunho i think it's real but it end up being a dream , so i thought this was also a dream but ta-da it's real yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :D can't wait for the last chapter and i hope Yunho will stop pushing Jae away. thx for updating ^_^
holaaa..just saw ur updates! love love love it very much ^^ i laughed like an idiot in chapter 4a. before i knew dbsk, i thought kaka was the most georgeous male ever grace the earth, lol. no wonder jae could cheat with kaka in his dreams xD update again please..i'm so curious, what is going on in yunho's mind?? whatever the reason is, i'm sure he did everything because he loves jae. heck, he even loves jae as he is, not just because jae looked like his mom. oh, and finally..we have a real smut xD *nosebleeding
homfg I really want to punch you!!! That's my reaction cause I luuuuuve you right now, Kaka was my husband before I met our members! I was going to marry that man srsly. I was 16 & he was my giant crush. I see a dangerous pattern lol.
Exactly, Yunho's decision is for what he thinks is best for JJ. He can be wrong though. Thanks for reading <3
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Thank you for writing and sharing
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I agree with you about that, originally I planned this story to be plain goofy, but somehow those love feelings are difficult to ignore and since it's incest the struggle just shows. I'm glad you noticed it and liked hehe.
I decided to make this fic wholly as Jae POV cause I haven't done that before, I use the third person in my other stories, so Yunho's thoughts will be revealed by Jae himself when he finally understands why his father pushed him away.
Exactly, this part B is 15 year old Jae finally making sexy with Yunconda. The following scenes after Yunho said that he was sending Jae to Tokyo are in the next chapter.
Thank U for reading <333
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o and I'm looking forward for chapter 5. :DD
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i admit i was confused a little coz every time Jae dream about making love with Yunho i think it's real but it end up being a dream , so i thought this was also a dream but ta-da it's real yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :D can't wait for the last chapter and i hope Yunho will stop pushing Jae away.
thx for updating ^_^
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thanks for reading ^-^
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love love love it very much ^^
i laughed like an idiot in chapter 4a. before i knew dbsk, i thought kaka was the most georgeous male ever grace the earth, lol. no wonder jae could cheat with kaka in his dreams xD
update again please..i'm so curious, what is going on in yunho's mind?? whatever the reason is, i'm sure he did everything because he loves jae. heck, he even loves jae as he is, not just because jae looked like his mom.
oh, and finally..we have a real smut xD *nosebleeding
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Exactly, Yunho's decision is for what he thinks is best for JJ. He can be wrong though. Thanks for reading <3
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