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Jan 28, 2009 03:59

“So, this Kaoru chick’s a friend of yours, huh?”

“Patient,” Megumi corrected frostily, doing her best to look irritated at the intrusion of the two armed soldiers in her clinic. It wasn’t hard. Kaoru’s reckless actions combined with Sagara Sanosuke’s abject stupidity meant her patience was already stretched to breaking point. She tapped her ( Read more... )

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serphenia March 9 2011, 07:39:35 UTC

This one of those fanfictions that sticks with you a long time after you've read it. Found it on ff.net again recently and was glad I did, and gladder when I found out that there's more over here. The characterization is awesome, and the concept is VERY original ( ... )

serphenia June 28 2011, 07:33:37 UTC

I totally agree! I started reading this when you were still posting daily chapters, and till this day the story and characters have still remained with me and I've been dying to find out what happens to them. I really can't wait to find out how Kenshin and Kaoru end up meeting face to face, would Kaoru be bothered by the fact that she was almost killed by Kenshin's creation, who coincidently looks like him, and how would Kenshin react to knowing that Kaoru survived his program?

I love your writing style and characterization, in fact I could totally see this made into a big budget Hollywood film.

I just want to let you know that however long it takes for you write this story out, you've got a fan here supporting you! Oddly, I just found a comment I posted back in 2009, that's gotta take you back hahah

Keep up the great work!!!

Hamit

akira_setsuka July 3 2011, 14:08:21 UTC

Found this story on ff.net and I managed to continue reading it here :D I am now completely and utterly hooked onto this story.

I hope you have not abandoned this story, I'll be real sad. Honest! I'll be waiting impatiently for you to update XD

anonymous February 9 2012, 01:01:34 UTC

Oh wow! Found this today and love it!
The story and the world you created for it are amazing! The plot is very well thought out and it never gets boring, and all the characters are portrayed to perfection.
I really love the depth they all have!
This is definitely a story I will constantly be checking!!!!! ^_^
Momo Yo Maki