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zanarkand_kid Mar 02, 2020 19:00

HMD/CONCRIT POST

This is my concrit post for Tidus. Constructive Criticism/Comments/Suggestions are all welcome. Anon commenting is turned on and comments are screened.

!concrit, !hmd

17th Blitz: [Written]

zanarkand_kid Aug 11, 2009 01:29

I guess I disappeared for a little while. I've been taking care of Yuna. She's back, to those who were concerned ( Read more... )

homebody for a bit, lil buddy, yuna, ): aw taichi, being a good boyfriend

[Can he really pass up taking advantage of this? He still doesn't have Yuna back, so he needs some entertainment.]

Alright, alright... um... everyone take a lap around the village! Girls go counterclockwise, guys go clockwise!

playing around, he's affected too, event, let's see if it works

15th Blitz: [Voice]

zanarkand_kid Jul 23, 2009 13:57

People are coming back from kidnappings now, right?

Rikku came back... but she was taken after Yuna was. Has anyone seen her?

I'll need to go keep an eye out... what'll I need... blanket, first aid kit, some food... Damn, I can't cook. Ugh...

curious, ramble ramble, time to look for yuna, kidnappings

14th Blitz: Voice

zanarkand_kid Jul 18, 2009 15:04

They took Yuna, again.

Don't worry, I'm not gonna ambush the barrier again. Damn it, though, can't they leave her alone? Aren't the normal experiments enough? [A frustrated noise.]

my yuna lies beyond the barrier~, my yuna lies over the... trees~, yuna, mopey

13th Blitz: [Action]

zanarkand_kid Jul 13, 2009 02:24

[Here's a very placated Tidus, sprawled out, napping near the river after a nice afternoon of nostalgia. He laid out to dry and ended up dozing off. There's a ball nearby, evidence of him doing some Blitzball practice. He's smiling comfortably in his sleep, though.]

!action, nap time, maybe amphibian

12th Blitz: Written

zanarkand_kid Jun 26, 2009 12:54

I lucked out on this one, I guess.

Rikku, on the other hand... sounded like she was stuck with something annoying. I guess the old man got out of it. No Sin around.

This should be over soon, though, right?

not jecht, not seymour, not sin, doing okay, event, escaped

11th Blitz: [Voice]

zanarkand_kid Jun 04, 2009 23:35

Of all the people...

Lulu!

We've gotta talk!

sjkdfhksjdf, bad ideas, what is this?, screw this, gotta be kidding me, lulu what were you thinking, moving into a tent

10th Blitz: [Voice]

zanarkand_kid May 29, 2009 21:57

I've never been so relieved that Yuna's gone. She'd never be able to stand this mess.

9th Blitz: [Voice]

zanarkand_kid May 19, 2009 12:26

H-hey...

What's it mean when a person's stuff is suddenly gone?

where's yuna?, lulu what happened ;;, jkdfhsjksdfhsdf, as caaalm as possible, yuna's room is empty, fml