BBM PICTURE PERFECT chapter 6

[zankou164]

Chapter 6

Jack sat at the breakfast bar tapping his fingers repeatedly and swinging his legs under his stool like an anxious child.

“He said twelve…it's half-past, I wonder if he got lost,” Jack thought, adjusting his white t-shirt.

Jack had spiked his hair up so it stood straight on end. He twisted one of the spikes with his fingers in anticipation

Comments

[bbmbeliever]

funny and sweet chapter.

[tizi17]

they know what they want, don't they? sweet young boys in love..

[zankou164]

they sure do know what they want :)
thanks for the comments everyone

[gnashsang]

"you got a pup tent" lol.

you have a wonderful way with words!

i love how in the earlier chapter jack was waiting outside for ennis, you really made the anticipation and disappointment of possibly being stood up so palpable. and that's cool that ennis works with animals... love the lemon coat!

great dialog

[lancecowboy]

LOL

it reminds me so much of the chemistry in Moonlighting (an old TV show) and Gilmore Girls. All the endless bantering and humor.

Great work.

thanks

[zankou164]

thanks guys im glad you enjoyed :)