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[zarathaz]

Her voice is a necessity in a land without

Her words my mind cannot understand

Though her words my heart refuses to doubt

I watch her dance under a blazing sun

Her shirt is tattered, and her shoulders are burned

Her movements are as foreign as her words

Careless like wind, yet deeply concerned

My stubborn eyes melt in the sunlight

Refusing to close and

Comments

[autumnsea]

This is so beautiful to the mind and senses.

Just a quick typo edit for you: in the first line: 'woman'.

[zarathaz]

Hey, thanks so much for the comment, and pointing out my typo...oops!

[ghostofagypsy]

You've become such a beautiful poet, darling. <3