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zarrati

Fic: Crossing Borders (15/?)

Sep 12, 2015 18:09

Title: Crossing Borders (15/?)
Author: zarrati
Rating: R for Language, sexual content, and violent/traumatic themes
Fandom: Parks and Recreation-Leslie/Ben
Author’s note: Back to Ben's POV. Please be warned that there are some depictions of violence and torture. I tried not to overdo it, but it's still here.

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parks and recreation, fanfic, dictator au

Comments 3

likeascience September 13 2015, 08:20:28 UTC

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT IS HAPPENING OMG! that whole dream scene in the grass had me meeeeeeeeelting and I was not expecting that ending and AH! you continue to captivate me with this story. thank you for posting!

nutriyum_addict September 13 2015, 16:40:42 UTC

Oh, I am so happy there is more! And that Ben seems to be safe! :) I can't wait for the next part!

shornt September 14 2015, 00:46:02 UTC

YOU CONTINUE TO KILL ME. Your writing has become so vivid, I had to skip over a little bit of the violence - but that's a good thing!! You're capturing the horror of their situation SO WELL. It's provided a jarring difference to the prior chapters that really highlights how scared the characters are, I don't know, I really love it. And his dream did make me SUPER emotional, because this is truly a horrific life or death situation and all of that really broke my heart. I can't wait to find out what's going on but I'm so happy it's not gonna be a million chapters of torture, hah, MY HEART CAN ONLY TAKE SO MUUUCH.