Title. (Never) Stop
Author. Zee
Pairings. Hermione/Ginny
Rating. R
Summary. They have to stop doing that.
Warnings. DH/Prologue compliant
Disclaimer. Not mine, no profit, just borrowing for fun and all that.
Author Notes. Thanks to
lash_larue for the quick beta (again), all remaining mistakes are mine :)
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They’ve been doing this for years now, (...) )
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I'm just going to be downright annoying and leave a long comment because really, I'm incapable of leaving short ones. Sigh.
My ideal situation with Hermione and Ginny is pretty normal; awakward teen lusting while at Hogwarts, but later realize that they aren't supposed to keep going on like this and they just life like JKR intended them to. I'm pretty happy with that scenario because a) I love JKR and b) I love Harry and Ron way to much to cheat them out of a good life.
However,
Your situation was basically splendid. I mean, as long as Harry and Ron were asses and not good husbands (they're leaving these two home alone a lot, so WIFE NEGLIGENCE), Hermione and Ginny can totally divorce them. But I did enjoy how they were mindful of the kids and their comfort and lives.
Besides, if Hermione and Ginny get together, who's to say that Ron and Harry were going to the bar? ;)
Spectacular.
*is off to stalk more fanfiction from you*
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I like the idea of these two discovering love after growing up. I mean, not discovering but facing it, you know? Like they knew it was there all along, but they were aware of their obligations, of what was expected of them, so they didn't pursue it - until they grew tired of it, or something happened to make them explode about the situation and just be together. I have another Hr/G in progress that elaborates more of this idea, and I've been looking forward to wriite more of it, but I can't find the right muse lately...
And, yes, who's to say they were indeed working? Even though I think I thought they were working when I wrote it, but still... hahah
Thanks, really. :)
*going to answer the other comments*
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That's a great idea, I suppose, and I'm totally open minded, believe me (or maybe not... is one supposed to say that when referencing to self? Sigh) about pairings and such, except for professors with students. I take that back; I'm not entirely against Snape/Hermione, even though I don't think I could write it. I'm just not that... gruesome. Anyway, I do like Hermione and Ginny together, but maybe not in a withstanding relationship. I think if I ever brewed one, I'd do a one (or seven) time thing while yes, Harry and Ron are out and "working."
Working. Ha.
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Hermione/Ginny is probably my OTP for femmeslash, though Ginny/Luna is also very pretty. (I better not go on, or you'll have to hear about fslash pairings a lot) Oh, I used to read Snape/Hermione a lot when I was younger! Now I just stick to the flash, it's... safer. And sometimes it's not, but you just have to be careful where you step, I guess hahah
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I can't really see a reason why anyone would want to stalk me (besides me being really weird silly awesome, I mean), but it's really okay :D
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I hope we do :D so far, I've only met wonderful weirdos people on LJ, so I really hope we have many years of stalking ahead :D
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Hach.. i guess I'll sleeping with a smile on my face...
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I'm glad to know you'll sleep with a smile on your face after reading it :D
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That's always hard to hear, but has to be heard sometimes.
When had Ginny became so blunt, so… fearless?
Since Potter. :Þ
I thought that if maybe you saw that I was dating, that I had… grown up, you would pay attention to me.
That almost makes a surprising amount of sense. Although perhaps being so blunt and forthright then may have been a good idea, too. :B
Their kids were their own, and no one else’s.
That's an interesting point to read. Hadn't thought of it!
“We should never stop doing this,” she said while putting a rose and a ring on Ginny’s chest, a loving smile upon her face.
Aaaawwwr fluff! I like that they went for the divorce in this, too, instead of stringing Harry and Ron along indefinitely. It's also true to character that they would think of the children first.
Great fic! :D
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In my head, being blunt is always a good idea when it comes to Hermione. Because she's very much focused on books and reality and rationality, so being blunt about one's feelings would be the only way she'd understand it for real. Or something >_>
Cheating and divorce and children are all things that I can relate to, in my life. I think I could write them any way I wanted if I wanted, you know? But because of my experience with it, I choose to write them the way I'd do it if it were me.
Thanks, Kiwi ;)
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