[fic] Of Secrets [Chapter 3: Part 2//EDITED]

[zorata]

Title: Of Secrets
Length: 4/?
Genre: AU/Drama
Pairing: eventually
Summary: Becoming a pianist cost Jaejoong his childhood, and what will happen when he loses this skill he worked so long for? Little did he know will lose a lot more by keeping this secret all to himself.

Character Profiles
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3: Part 1//EDITED

Comments

[sheilapiglet]

that was extremely confusing...lol..I have no idea what just happened...hopefully both JJ and YH's past will be explained clearly in the next chapter..haha..thanks!=)

[zorata]

Aieee I know why it's so confusing now! >_< I'm so sorry I confused you~ I'll go fix all those weird time skips right away. Thanks for reading anyway! And commenting even though it was confusing ^^"

[zorata]

Okay, I've fixed the majority of the mistakes. Hopefully it's slightly clearer now. ^^"

jae and yun's past most likely won't be explained in the next chapter since they play a big role in the plot. Actually, yun's past might be explained earlier, but definitely not jae's. XD

Thank you again for letting me know it was confusing~

[asuka2507]

oh no! im suppose to do my revision... but im reading this first

[asuka2507]

oh joongie~ did he overheard the conversation... but this is good... everyone is falling for joongie... haha XD so cute... all the girls here are not bitchy thankgod ahhaah XD

[zorata]

XD Thank you for reading! The girls won't play a major part of the story anyway, so they'll probably stay as they are (which is good right? XD ).

Do your revision! XD

[ai_fantasy9]

it was a bit confusing...the last bit that is. but everything else was good =) janitor!! if i had a janitor as jaejoong at my school, i would be making a mess all the time XD JK

i hope you update soon? the story is rather intersting =)

[zorata]

Thank you for reading! I'm so sorry it's confusing. I reread it just now and found the badly written parts. I'll be fixing it as soon as possible XD

"if i had a janitor as jaejoong at my school, i would be making a mess all the time"

lol~ you've figured out their scheme XD

[zorata]

edited! Hopefully it's clearer now. If you still have any questions, please ask! Thanks!

[arakasu]

If Jae is my school's janitor I would buy a 10 mega pixel digital cam AND START STALKING HIM!!! Ahem excuse me ^^

This chapter is fun ^^ Twisted theories XD

Thanks for updating! ^^

[zorata]

*applauds your fangirlism*

Thank you for taking the time to read this! I really appreciate it! XD

[tashyahero]

i'm gonna die if i had
a janitor that looks like jaejoong...
arghh..i'm suppose to study for my tomorrow exam...
but your fic is so irresistable

[zorata]

haha Thank you for reading! Although you really should go study instead. It'd be terrible the reason for doing badly on your exam is me. >_< Go study! hwaiting~!