[fic practice] Wishing on a Purple Box [Part 3b]

Jun 12, 2008 23:19

Title: Wishing on a Purple Box
Length: Two Shot (2/2) Three Shot
Genre: Hopefully the outcome will be romance (plus a bit of angst)
Pairing: YunJae
Beware: of exaggerated and detail narration.
Warning: may implode your eyeballs. 8D
Summary: Jaejoong got a mysterious purple box for his birthday, and Yunho came out of it.

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ajmxii June 13 2008, 06:43:22 UTC
Very sad ending :( I feel like crying when reading Yunho's last thought.

Hoping for a happy ending for them. I'll wait for the epilogue.

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zorata June 13 2008, 22:37:22 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm sorry I made it all sad (but I needed practice writing sad stuffs). Epilogue coming up! Don't worry, I can't stand writing any more sadness now >_<

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alia_cassiopeia June 13 2008, 07:10:01 UTC
it's so sad :(
i still hope that yunho can be real *in the story of coz* not as some genie....
epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!

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zorata June 13 2008, 22:38:04 UTC
consider your wish granted. *spoils*

=D Thank you for reading~

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hana_cho June 13 2008, 08:17:08 UTC
oh that is so sad.
I must almost cry.

I hope YunHo comes back.

plz update soon

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zorata June 13 2008, 22:39:27 UTC
Don't cry TT_TT That'd make me feel bad...

Thank you for reading~!

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zoolooney June 13 2008, 08:27:43 UTC
. . . . . O.O

AAAHHHH~~~!! **Points frantically**

Loved Yunho talking to his teacup....butbutbutBUT he sacrificed himself for Jae's sake!!

T-T x 100

....**sniffle** Epilogue please. I am banking on the fact that your genre is romance, and the pairing is YunJae. This is the angst part. No need no more, plskthx.

....unless....**Eyes widen in horror** .....no. You wouldn't be that cruel to us, would you?

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zorata June 13 2008, 22:42:29 UTC
Don't worry, no more angst, no more! I can't stand and more angst >_< For some reason, writing angst amplifies it more than reading it. I felt like I suffered it ten times over.

I think I need to put more romance into the fic. I suck at romance more than anything. Hence the lack of it here I guess.

Thank you for reading! *points back frantically* XD

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sidmaron June 13 2008, 08:54:43 UTC
T___T

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sidmaron June 13 2008, 08:55:59 UTC
*aaaaaaw*
noooo....it's too...
we need a happy ending!
PLS! ;_;

schu(h)

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sidmaron June 13 2008, 08:57:36 UTC
ôo... i forgot...
actually i had this feeling when jj wished for his parents to go on a trip that sth. might happen to them X____x

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zorata June 13 2008, 22:46:29 UTC
lol, happy ending coming soon. XD

your feelings were right then! I hope all the readers will understand that you shouldn't wish your parents away because there's a chance you'll never see them again. Appreciate our parents!

Thank you for reading~

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