[FIC] Snow [One-Shot]

[zorata]

Title: Snow
Length: One Shot
Author: zorata
Rating: PG-15 for sensitive ideological material
Genre: Angst (and a whole lot of narration)
Summary: A picture speaks a thousand words, but a prayer grants a thousand wishes. And so Junsu will pray for Yoochun, everyday.

Comments

[yoosu_ftw]

Ugggh, thanks for reminding me I'm not supposed to like this stuff. D= -is a christian too-
I feel so bad for Junsu, because I can kind of understand what he's going through, praying and praying for forgiveness and praying for the well being of another, no matter how much it hurts....
Thank you for this fic, it seems a lot more real than any other fic, as love is never a straight answer, it's always an obstacle.
Oh, but my heart. T-T

[zorata]

It's good that it seems real. I'm glad I can pull off this kind of effect on the readers. Most of the fic was based on personal experiences, so this really came from the bottom of my heart. I just want people to understand that it's okay to struggle. Sometimes it so easy to just follow what we want, or do what our hearts tell us to do, but isn't always the right way to go. Love isn't just from the heart; we have a brain for a reason too. To think that loving someone is a straightforward path is too naive.

aiee if I keep going on my train of thought, I'd spew out an essay >_

[yoosu_ftw]

Mmm, stories written from experience make the best fics, atleast that's what I think. ^-^ My brain is lacking, so I tend to follow my heart more, and that's what gets me in more trouble then I should really get in. Love is definately not straight forward, I think that's what makes this fic more real. =]

Ahaha, I'll stop too before I rant~ It was my pleasure to read!

[ara_niey]

it's not boring at all dear~

this is what normally happens anyway..especially for those with strong religion background..

poor su though..*sigh*

[zorata]

=D I'm glad it wasn't boring ^^"

I do feel sorry for su...but it would've been worse if chun loved him back, because then he'd have to follow through with the same decision but with a lot more hurt involved.

anyway, thanks for reading! <3

[chibi_creampuff]

AWWWW

Poor Su, Yoochun doesn't even notice how much Su truely loves him.

D8

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This wasn't boring at all!!I loved it. 8D~♥

[zorata]

Junsu hid his feelings well from Yoochun ^^"

yay~ It's not boring XD I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!

[siriusmoonpup]

Soooo i was out searching for a wonderful angsty Yoosu fic and et voila your fic popped up..and it made me crrrrrrrrrry because i imagine how Junsu feels >.< and yet he still prays for Yoochun..so sad..

[zorata]

Wow, this wasn't that recent and you still managed to find it? D: *applauds*

=[ don't cry... although I'm happy that my writing can touch people like this. But it's not totally completely sad...Junsu still has God's love that'll last forever and ever.

Thank you for reading! =D

[siriusmoonpup]

Haha i looked at your journal =D i was trying to find an angsty fic XD and that was definitely angsty ;__; i totally felt Junsu's pain *siighs*

And yes Junsu will always have God's love even if he cant have Yoochun's

Thank you for writing! XD

[zorata]

oh, people actually look through my journal? D: wow...maybe I should make it more organized then >_

[stephyalexis]

in love wIth your writing so decide to read more from your journal
and this one wow am speechless, it was so beautiful
i always love to read fanfic that have a deeper meaning somethinbg more from just sex or onesided love, adding the religion was more realistic and a personal struggle
the poem was so great
really great job in this
oohh sorry for the long commnet XD

[zorata]

haha you might find a lot of onesided love in my fics, but definitely not a lot of sex XD I can't stand writing smut. It's the hardest thing ever >_<

I don't like writing things for just pure entertainment (which are kinda what fanfics are). I want to make sure that everything I write makes an impact on the readers, either for them to learn something or reflect on their personal lives. I wrote this fic based on religion because I'm sick of Christianity bashings. I'm sick of the hypocrites who try to fight discrimination with discrimination. So I hope to broaden people's perspectives.

I'm glad you liked this deep fic and wasn't bored with my long-winded narration. ^^"

oh and the poem.... hahaha it's so cheesy now that I reread it. >_> at that time, I just wanted to brush up on my poem writing skills XD

Thank you for reading~ and the long comment. Don't worry, it's a joy to read =D