[FIC] Don't Push My Hand Away [Drabble]

Jul 17, 2008 01:28

Title: Don't Push My Hand Away
Pairings: YunJae
Length: medium
Author: zorata
Rating: PG
Genre: slight angst + frustrations + twisted humour
Summary: Yunho tries to hold Jaejoong's hand, and somewhat fails to hold on.

The first of the 'Body Drabbles'.

Makes more sense to read the Hearts Drabbles first:

[1] Strong Hearts
[2] Explanation for Using MyRead more... )

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chibi_creampuff July 17 2008, 22:40:40 UTC
FIRST???? D8

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chibi_creampuff July 17 2008, 22:59:52 UTC
YAAAAAY I WAS FIRST~!!♥♥ ^___^

Awww!!

wth is wrong with Jae??How could he reject Yunho like that.

I love Jae to bits but he's being a weirdo. ¬___¬;;

Yunho is trying so hard to be a good boyfriend.Poor thing. ;_;

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zorata July 17 2008, 23:07:12 UTC
haha yea, jae's too used to being independent, and he thinks to much about his problems. And you would think that Jae's gonna be ecstatic to have yunho care about him since he liked yunho in the first place.

Yunho's trying hard, but he's kinda clueless when it comes to jae.

Thank you for reading! <3

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zorata July 17 2008, 23:00:43 UTC
yes D:

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tine_cheese July 17 2008, 22:50:35 UTC
TT____TT you are updating this right? TELL ME YOU ARE!!! >_< There's seriously something up with Jaejoong! TT_____TT it hurt me to see them like that....XD whoa...going too deep with my fangirl-ness. Anyways I'll wait for your update! ^^

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zorata July 17 2008, 23:12:30 UTC
yes yes, I'll be updating XD I don't think I've seen you comment on my fics before, so thank you for commenting. =D Did you read the Hearts Drabbles before this? (just in case you don't know the storyline).

thank you so much for reading!

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sidmaron July 17 2008, 23:02:22 UTC
*aaaaaaaaaaw* :D
don't worry, dear!
it's lovely! ^^
and your writing is really good! as always! *hehe*
(*aaw* yoosu meets up! *tihi*)

poor yunnie *aw* hope jae'll tell him what's wrong soon! =(

and you!
update soon, neh! ^____________~
*hehe*cuddle*
schu(h)

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zorata July 17 2008, 23:15:59 UTC
lol you are the only one who caught the yoosu XD

yea, yunnie will find out eventually (when I figure out what body parts to match with the story XD ).

thank you for reading! <3

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sidmaron July 18 2008, 10:43:01 UTC
how comes??? O___O
he says susu's name twice!!! TWICE!!!
(that means he loves him!!! ;PPP~)

*hehe* i'm sure you'll figure it out!!! ^___^
because you're GREAT!!! just like your stories!!!
keep on writing! Fightiiii~ng!! :DDD

schu(h)

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zorata July 18 2008, 10:51:09 UTC
haha I think everyone who reads this is a yunjae fan, not a yoosu fan. XD People tend to only notice things they like ^^

aww thank you, you flatter me ^^ hwaiting~

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jkkwai July 17 2008, 23:02:31 UTC
XDDD

updatess :DD

poor yunho ;__; jaejoong what's wrong? im sure you can tell your yunnie DD:

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zorata July 17 2008, 23:24:05 UTC
just wondering, did you read my stuff before? I don't remember you commenting. XD

you know sometimes you have problems you don't want to tell your closest friend mainly because they are so close to you? It's kind of like that for Jae. It's complicated... D:

thank you for reading! =D

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jkkwai July 17 2008, 23:50:37 UTC
LOL

yes i have but i keep forgetting to comment XD;

but awwww ;__; i hate it when it's complicated like that DX

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zorata July 18 2008, 00:48:20 UTC
XD I just thought that you sounded like you've read my fics ^^" I'm glad you commented here then! =D

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ajmxii July 18 2008, 00:04:02 UTC
Relationship is not going well :(
I love Hearts Drabbles. The stories are cute, not too angst.
But this one is quite angst already...

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zorata July 18 2008, 00:51:03 UTC
no, their relationship is not going well at all D:

yes, this is already taking an angsty start >_< hopefully it won't continue this way...^^"

thanks for reading! <3

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