purestofprose Contest #22

[1_rhiannon_1]

Title: Not For Him
Word Count: 100 per wordcounter.net
Warnings: none

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The others walked away, presumably to leave her to say her goodbyes and mourn in peace. She was grateful for the distance, and for the fact that they took her daughter with them. She didn't want Sophia to hear what she had to say.

She crouched down next to the grave, her

Comments

[atxstnic]

I wouldn't have forgive that sorry SOB. Not even in death.

I like it!

[1_rhiannon_1]

Yeah, me either - he was an ass who needed to die.

thanks babe! <3

[luveskane]

She is a bigger woman then I could ever be. I don't think I could forgive him even in death. Wonderful lil sniipet hon :)

[1_rhiannon_1]

You and me both - he deserved what he got. thank you darlin <3 I'm so glad you like it!

[luveskane]

He sure did!! *snuggles* I am getting very spoiled by all your writing and I will be going through withdrawels once the month is over if you dont keep it up at least once a week or so LOL.

[1_rhiannon_1]

Awww <3 I love you, you know that? <3 I'll keep them going - I'm having far too much fun to just stop :D I wouldn't know what to do with myself if I didn't have a story in the hopper.

[basric]

Excellent writing

[1_rhiannon_1]

Thank you! <3

[kiora1]

very well done, however I am with the others in the no forgiveness ring an asshole is still an asshole even if he is dead

[1_rhiannon_1]

Thank you! <3 I agree - he didn't deserve forgiveness and he was most definitely an asshole.

[kiora1]

without a doubt

[shallowz]

Ack! I can't keep up with you!

But hey, I want to know more here. Good stuff.

[1_rhiannon_1]

LOL! I've been a busy little writer bee this month!

Thanks doll! <3 I'm not sure if Carol has anything else to tell me or not - we'll see :o)