Unfinished (Mello/Near)

[flamika]

Title: Unfinished
Author: Flamika (flamika)
Claim: Mello/Near (pairing)
Rating: 17+ (adult language, sexual situations)
Notes: Definite spoilers up to Page 99, but also a slight spoiler warning for Page 104.

Comments

[geartemis]

Wonderful. *___* This goes really in-depth on the many facets of their relationship (and I really liked Near's description as a cotton ball. ^^)

[flamika]

Thanks! ^^ I kind of felt bad about calling Near a cottonball because so many anti-Near peeps do it, but haha, sometimes he DOES look like a cottonball.

[flamika]

Thank you!

[kurosaki_akane]

Waa, I'm sorry for being a bit of stalker, I just found your journal today when I was looking for Mello and Near writings...
I think this is a masterpiece @@
I have been trying hard to put what Near is into words, my thoughts betray me because my brain is more friendly with images instead.
What you wrote really touched me.

And 20. made me cry (_ _) It really made me cry, so I'm posting here to let you know that what you wrote I find priceless (T T)
I think Near's life is so empty now, sometimes I got to think it would be better for him to die there...
However this boy will have to bear with an empty life forever... because let's face it, without Mello his life is really empty (_ _)

I hope you don't mind that I add you to friend list (^^;; Your writing about Death Note is inspiring to me (like fuel to my imagination!).

[flamika]

Thank you for your comments! ^^ Near's tricky for me to pin down so I'm glad he came across okay here. I find my views on his change a little with almost every chapter.

Of course I don't mind. ^^ I've seen your artwork on the yaoi FC on TOWNL and really like it. XD

[es_baka]

18. is my favorite part, after I read that paragraph I cried...

You're the adorable writer one that you can describe Mello/Near into very in-character >< (Sorry,I'm lack of Eng and couldn't think what kind of words to explain this feeling)

I also like the way you put Near into cottonball-tan XD So cute~~~!

Ah,I love your work as much as Mello/Near pairing.

Though,in very last chapter...MN is tragic.
They're so sad couple,I think. TTwTT But I'll try to creat a lot of fanwork for their sake,like you ><

Thank you for present the gorgeous fanwork that encourage me to do my own work T^To Thank you so much >

[flamika]

You're welcome. Good luck with your fanwork! XD

[anonymous]

Your work always fantastic ^^ I reeeealy love it. ^o^
...
Anyway..this writing inspired me to do some fanart..and if you dont't mind.. it's here ...

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f128/kokoro_rx/cottonball.jpg

(^ ^)b about"cottonball" again....(>w<) that phrase is really cute one.

[flamika]

aw, that's a cute art! XD