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Potions for Sorting

Jan 30, 2006 00:07

Name:Nancy
Age:20
AIM Screename ( if you have one ):MY PHOENIX SONG ( Sort me please )

Comments 40

Gryffinpuff _bondless January 30 2006, 10:19:06 UTC

Squib. If you choose to re-apply please take grammar more seriously, and try to add more because I couldn't get any vibe from this application.

Ravendors taste like chicken. heathah January 30 2006, 12:54:07 UTC

Meeeep, my second squib in a row. Really sorry dear, but as the others said, the capitalization was a big issue. I tried to see around it, and when I did, I also noticed that you were overall a little bland. I mean, the most I could do would be to say that I GUESS you belong in Hufflepuff, since Helga said she'd teach "the rest," but I absolutely refuse to do that, because that's such a technicality, and I know the real sorting hat would be able to see inside every wizarding child's head, no matter who they are. Besides, even if I HAD done that, I couldn't even come away with a second house! So it's pretty much squib by default.

I do hope you reapply, though. :o Good luck. :)

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Ravendor brazenbitch January 30 2006, 14:22:43 UTC

Please go into more depth for every question. I know it can seem like a drag, and you might think that you've already said all you need to say here, but just try to add a little more (2, 3 sentences even!) to every answer, and you'd be surprised how much more about you we might see. I would also consider trying to actually answer questions that ask for specific answers, and then supporting those answers with a paragraph of explanation.

I think that the issue here was pretty much summed up in your last answer: i believe that i posses a bit of every house I've come to you for your opinion, and i have not, or at least knowingly, tried to say my application towards and one house, or house combo in the case. but hey it was fun. You were pushing, all right - pushing for Gryffinslytherclawpuff. You seemed to back away from dwelling on any one answer long enough for us to say with any kind of authority what house you belonged in, and while pushing for any single house is not encouraged, thought and insight into your personality as it ( ... )

Re: Ravendor alexander January 30 2006, 22:08:18 UTC

Please bold your vote :D

~AJ : Slytherpuff prefect

Re: Ravendor brazenbitch January 31 2006, 23:11:12 UTC

Eh. Oh. Right. Heh. Thanks.

Squib.

Should I repost?

Re: Ravendor alexander February 3 2006, 15:26:54 UTC

eeeep, forgot about this. Not for this one, but in the future probably :D We don't have enough voters to collapse the comments yet, but we will pretty soon (hopefully)

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Slytherdor kinneasirvine January 30 2006, 16:17:51 UTC

Gods, was your shift key broken? Or is English not your first language? Those were my first thoughts as I tried to read through this mess...a few typos, I could have overlooked, but this was downright painful to try and read.

All of your answers seemed extremely shallow as well...you didn't really give us any insight into who you were or what your opinions were, it seemed like you were trying to 'give the right answer'. As a result, not only could I NOT get a clear house vibe from you, but the entire application seemed sort of shallow...which is a pity.

Squib.

Slytherclaw jane85 January 30 2006, 17:52:59 UTC

Sorry, but I'm going to have to say Squib as well. I couldn't get anything from this. Like others said, you need to elaborate and work on the punctuation if you decide to apply again.

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