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Potions for Sorting

Jan 30, 2006 00:07

Name:Nancy
Age:20
AIM Screename ( if you have one ):MY PHOENIX SONG ( Sort me please )

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GryffinPuff bellatook January 30 2006, 18:01:24 UTC

I am so sorry about this, but I'm going to have to join the consensus on this Squib, you didn't really give off much of a vibe at all and your questions were very surface. I'm not one to judge capitalization, as I suck at it sometimes myself. But do re-apply in a month and give us a much better look at who you are.

Gryffinpuff pieces0fmyheart January 30 2006, 20:20:23 UTC

I think with a little editing and a little more substance, you would have a great application. So, for now, I'm going to have to say Squib.

Ravenpuff lilbellule January 30 2006, 22:17:06 UTC

I'm afraid I'm going to sound like an echo here, but Squib. This was simply too surface and not polished enough. I do hope to see you reapply though. Add some depth to your answers and proofread the application before you submit it again if you choose to do so, and I hope you do.

Julia, Ravenpuff Prefect

Ravendor cetacea January 30 2006, 22:35:08 UTC

Squib. You need to add a little more substance to each question and go back and fix your grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.

thehangedwoman//ravendor

Slytherpuff girlappropriate January 30 2006, 22:42:56 UTC

Oy. Squib for reasons already stated.