Stranded, Chapter 3

[_alicesprings]

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a

Comments

[moonchilddj]

Twenty-one days...? The family must be going berserk! That's a shuddering thought, though, if Luke runs out of anti-rejection pills before they're rescued...*whines and eyes that number again*

This one seems to be a mostly-ouch chapter...first Reid's phone with the wedding pictures on it, then Luke bursting out about the no-feelings, then Reid remembering about Lily's disapproval of him...even not being able to tell him about the wedding, because of it leading back to other things that Luke doesn't remember. Oh, my heart, she breaks! T_T Poor boys!

I do love that there's still that attraction, thank god...I'd feel horrible if Luke didn't even have that, because Reid really would be in a pickle, thinking that Luke would want a divorce or something soon as they're back on land. (Horrid thought, go away, horrid thought!) And oh, Luke watching Reid bathe...I just...well, all I can say there is YUM.

Also, Reid and Luke with a tan...almost all over...pardon me while my brain melts...<3

[_alicesprings]

Hee! Thank you so much! Love this comment! :D

Also, Reid and Luke with a tan...almost all over...pardon me while my brain melts...<3

Mmm, it's a good visual, huh? :D

Chapter 4 is up! Hope you like it!

[dpracket]

I am addicted to this fic. Seriously.

Reid looking at their wedding pictures -- that made me tear up. Poor boo.

And all the stuff about Reid's accident and recovery...and him not wanting to tell Luke... wah! “Because it’s - and I can’t believe I’m about to say this it's so gag-worthy - special, and Luke, my Luke, he knows how it happened, and it’s just for him and me.” --------- OMG. :(

The boys in yoga poses... :)

I'm loving that they are kind of flirty with each other. The fish stuff made me laugh...Reid being all still and them whooping when he caught one.

And I'm sort of thinking that Luke's body remembers Reid...just like the yoga stuff.

And they are so going to make love under that waterfall, right? Please, say yes. :D

[_alicesprings]

Thank you for the wonderful comment! Addicted to this fic? Yay! :D

So glad you enjoyed those things! I think Luke's body definitely remembers Reid!

And they are so going to make love under that waterfall, right? Please, say yes. :D

You might want to read the next chapter... :D

[on_the_ground]

This was amazing. I love how the more we read the more emotional it gets; and the way you wrote the "flashbacks" was really cool and interesting.. My heart keeps breaking for Reid. Great job! Thank you! ;)

[_alicesprings]

Thank you very much! Glad you liked the flashbacks! :D

[oh_amelia]

How long are you gonna keep them on the island? 21 days so far...wow. The family must be going crazy. Are we gonna get any snippits about what's going on at home?

[_alicesprings]

Nope, no snippets. I really wanted to keep this fic focused solely on Luke/Reid. Because I am lazy and only had 30 days to write it. :P

[tldreamer]

There were so many great moments in this chapter, but I want to call out "The Intruder." From the moment you mentioned it in an earlier chapter, I was croaking to know what was in it! So glad it resurfaced!

I love Luke's curiousity. I'm glad Reid is beginning to notice that Luke is interested in him...he shouldn't worry so much about Luke rejecting him although it is all very difficult.

And I loved the bet....and the chess playing. This is so much fun to read.

[_alicesprings]

Yay! Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! :)