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[_p0etictragedy_]

The clock ticks

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[dancingnthrain]

susana i really really like that.. and im not just saying that because im your friend... i honest to goodness love this..

i especially like all the imagery with the clock.. susana.. you are a poet

[lastxlullaby]

i agree completely... that was awesome susan!!!! wonderful imagery. love the way you described the snow falling and the picture of the baby. it was amazing. you are getting tons of kudos for this one!

[_p0etictragedy_]

kuudddooss

[dixeerebel]

lookie i can be a poet too!

there once was a girl named susanna
who loves her sweet home alabama
her friend was heather
who plays with feathers
and lori got a pet llama

i envy all my friends' wonderful skills with poetry.
that was magnificient, susanna.

[packingbags]

Your poetry is powerful and moving. All the imagery works together so well. You are the master poet out of all of us. Congrats. Keep writing more... I want to read some more.

On a completely different note... check it out... I fixed my own el jay... mwhaha

[_p0etictragedy_]

im ashamed of your fixed el jay, and, thank you for the compliments, but you win that contest.

[natemakla1988]

Susan your good but you hurt me when you said i was a sick kid

[lastxlullaby]

susana is too good a poet! she shames me! i would also like to say, i have missed my hero over spring break. no elevator game :( and yes, i know that i have already commented on this, but i decided i wanted to let the beautiful susana know how much i am loving her poetry and how her el jay lay out rocks my socks off