[Fic] When Mothers Asked Part 2

Apr 11, 2011 17:19


Title: When Mothers Asked [I don’t know how to put a title]

Author: akinoyama

Pairings: YabuHika, mention of HikaNoo

Rating: PG-13 for BL

Summary: When their mothers asked.

Warnings: Un-betaed, terrible English, my first fic after a very long time.

Notes: Inspired from BEST vs 7 in DVD Summary.

Hikaru sono omoi.... )

yaotome hikaru okaa-chan, fiction writing, yabu kouta otou-chan, one-shot, perfect couple koutahikaru

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chiaki94 April 11 2011, 19:31:47 UTC
This is pretty funny XD There's no need to hide their love cause everybody already knows!
I had to watch the performance again! How come I never realised the Yabu tapping his chest-part? So cute ^^<3

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akinoyama April 30 2011, 02:13:30 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
The first time I watched the performance, I did not realise either... xP I realised it after few months... xDDD and that gave me the inspiration...

And Thank you for reading and commenting...

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turtlelovey April 16 2011, 12:49:59 UTC
More! More! More! I want more Yabuhika fics..please! haha so demanding!

I love Yabu's sister teasing them! But I guess that's not enough for the overprotective boyfriend of Hikaru-chan! Kyaa~! Yabu's so stupid haha! And I HE'S JEALOUS with Inoo yay!

I also love that part in the Summary!!! Wahhh! that's so------ *dies*

Yabuhika love!!!!! I love it!!! more!!!!

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akinoyama April 30 2011, 02:17:55 UTC
I do really want to write more but there's not enough ideas... ): Sorry....

Yeah... Yabu indeed got jealous of those HikaNoo things...

Thank you for reading and commenting... :)

I may make another one for Mother's Day...

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turtlelovey May 5 2011, 11:31:28 UTC
Yatta that's a great news..I want Yabuhika so badly and recently Yabuhika fics are decreasing so fast..I want to read many of them..lol

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akinoyama May 5 2011, 13:15:41 UTC
Hope I can post it in time :)
Yeah... YabuHika fics're decreasing now... but at least in a week we still could read one of them, right? Compared to 3-4 years ago I think I should be thankful with a week... LOL

If you really want to read Yabuhika fics so badly... just read some of them that posted years ago... It made me felt better whenever I missed reading YabuHika fics...

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lynn_369 April 29 2011, 16:18:38 UTC
ohisashiburi desu!!
it has been a really long time since the last comment i wrote here~ >.<
really can imagine the fic, but if this were the real situation in their real life...wow...*speechless* hahah

nice fic btw

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akinoyama April 30 2011, 02:24:09 UTC
Kyaaaa..... Long time no see Lynn... :)

Woow... so glad to hear.... well this fic was a little inspired from one of Hikaru's Jumpapaers in which he said he, Yabu and their mothers had a chat together...

I don't know what to say either if it came to realisation...

Thank you for reading and commenting...

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hikary22 May 24 2011, 05:39:20 UTC
...Yabu’s mother saw how natural her son ruffled Hikaru’s hair when he heard Hikaru shouted ‘I’m lost!’... Her eyes followed Hikaru’s head which landed on Yabu’s shoulder, saying ‘Let’s try again.’

This part is just too sweet, I can almost imagine it in my head n it made me go all "Aweeeee~~~" :D

Indeed I enjoyed the fic! It was very amusing! <3 Keep writing YabuHika! ^^

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akinoyama June 19 2011, 02:56:40 UTC
Thank you... I just tried to picture their 'love and affection without saying with a word'

Thank you for reading and commenting :D
Well, actually I've written another YabuHika fic for Mother's Day... just haven't posted it to a community... kid of lazy xP
If you're interested... check it here:
http://akinoyama.livejournal.com/22290.html
(It has three parts though...)

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hikary22 June 20 2011, 17:06:42 UTC
I'm reading it now! :D

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