Mythical Simplicity (Chapter 4)

[amyross]

Chapter Four

John must have fallen asleep at some point in the night, because the sharp beams of sunlight cutting through his curtains in the early morning woke him abruptly. The confusion that had been puzzling him during the night was gone, taking the strange ideas with it, leaving him with the reality of mundane, wonderful everyday life.

He

Comments

[x_los]

Sexy and terribly sweet chapter. I love the differences in their reactions!

[amyross]

Thank you!

Hopefully Chapter 5 in the morning, but might be in the afternoon if I don't finish checking it tonight. Tried to leave work at 4, ended up leaving at 6:30. Typical.

[gigglestheblood]

Fabulous chapter. That lunar eclipse scene and the end were very beautifully done. :)

[amyross]

Thanks you! I was desperately trying not to self-insert there, because I tend to get all sappy when I see something like that.

These chapters just feel like an action vacuum to me. Nothing much seems to happen. So I'm trying to fill it with imagery and irony and other good things. Nice to hear it's working!

[huggabledog]

Beautifully written.

[amyross]

Thanks! Chapter 5 tomorrow, possibly a bit later than usual.

[x_bluerose_x]

Well done! I'm loving the blossuming relationship here!!

[amyross]

Thank you!

It's going to continue a little way into the next chapter, before the inevitable doom!

[amyross]

Oh, okay, I'll let you have that "DOOM!"

They're so sweet, aren't they. I have a few moments sweet moments planned ... the boot doesn't drop immediately.

Other things, maybe ...